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Shadowstone

LECTURES 71
Votes 14
Parties 7
Durée 45m

LECTURES 71
Votes 14
Parties 7
Durée 45m

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*feedback and constructive criticism/advice much appreciated(this was written when I was in high school)* I would love to get opinions and ideas for more chapters, character development, background stories, and focus. This is a short story! Thanks :)Tous Droits Réservés

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FROST: The Beginning Of The End (OG), écrit par Lovelycooldude

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More than partners?, écrit par regretmenot

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FROST: The Beginning Of The End (OG)

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