The Flaw
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Last published Wed, Aug 10, 2016
Highest rank: #22 Mystery/Thriller
Tom Marvel, the best detective of FBI gets a case that is full of mysteries. He must find the killer before he gets away. Will he be able to catch him?
Author's note: This story is purely fictional. It does not intend to offend or degrade any person or agency. Resemblance to any person dead or alive is purely coincidental.
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