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criticism depresson grievance poetry rhyme

I'm starting to experiment with rhyme scheme in poetry. Please let me know if this flows or not, (pun intended). I would really appreciate some criticism and feedback.  Have a wonderful day readers!All Rights Reserved

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Water makes a perfect metaphor.
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