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The 'Rogue' at the End of the Tunnel by Vanitas678

"I Alpha Jason Huntsman of the Blue Moon Pack reject you Esmeray Woodsmith of the Blue Moon pack as my mate." My knees feel weak and my whole body starts to tremble under this invisible force. My heart feels like shattered into a hundred pieces; my head starts throbbing like hit by a hundred-pound rock. Well, expected of the great Alpha of a jerk to reject the so-called weakling of the pack. But I do not let the scene unfold the way this arrogant fool of an Alpha wishes. I lift my chin, straighten my back, a hint of a smirk playing on my lips, I say much more arrogantly " I Esmeray Woodsmith of Blue Moon Pack except the rejection of Alpha Jason Huntsman of Blue Moon pack." =========== I wipe off the blood from my treasured dagger. And walk out of the Leader's Den, to face the people ready to accept me as their new Alpha. Well, not until recently was I rejected by my mate for being a right-hand man of a so-called Rogue leader. The one I just killed. And my new Beta calls out as I walk out of the Cabin's door. "We welcome our new leader the Rogue King." And that is when I decide to show myself to the world. And who knew I would be mated to the strongest female wolf I have ever come across. ======= Book#1 of "The Lost Princes" series.

Mackenzie's Critique Shop by UnidentifiedIsHere

[PERMANENTLY CLOSED] Want a genuine reader and helpful critiques? In this shop, I offer you helpful advice and outlook on your book, all while commenting and voting! I try my best to read everything in your story, and provide as helpful outlooks on it as I can. Check inside for more details. ... [] OPEN [] CLOSED FOR CATCH UP [] HIATUS [!] PERMANENTLY CLOSED

I'll Make You Remember by _forbiddenkinks

I relaxed my jaw "That's it baby, take it. You thought I forgot about you fucking my best friend to get back at me?" He grabs on the back of my head forcing himself down my throat "Make it sloppy I want to see how messy you can get. Show me how sorry you are." I know he's still holding back, and I want to see how aggressive he can get, so I don't follow his orders which only strikes his anger. He raises my head up by my hair, so his dick falls out of my mouth. "How about you focus on the road" Milo smiles at me before looking back at the road, I spit on his dick before grabbing it with both hands. "You know you enjoyed seeing me ride your best friend till we both came together. We can always do a round two and you can join if you want." He presses on the gas even more going faster than before "You better make me cum before we make it home or I'll tie you up and fuck you till I think you had enough." ... Layanna is a lover at heart. After going through hell, she still takes in everyone else's sins like it's her own and wears them in her scars. Everyone knows who she is but doesn't know her real story and she keeps it from the kids she raises. All they know is what they see and how she ended up with her with her husband. Do they even know how she's surviving? Layanna falls in love for all the wrong reasons to benefit the last of her family even if that means she has to suffer.

story review shop [[ discontinued ]] by merrrrrrcy

Have you been searching for someone to give their honest opinion on your work? Are you browsing review books to find the next story you'll fall in love with? Me too, bro. The reviews are 100% free for those willing to have their stories criticized, and my reviews are 100% honest with a hint of sweetness to soften things up. Please, come on in and request. Give me something new to read. Give me something /good/ to read.

Accept Me or Reject Me. You Can't Do Both. (First book) (Completed) by RissaleWriter

A/N: Just as a reminder. I am not a cliche person. I do do cliche topics but they all have a Rissa twist. Check it out, and I hope ya'll enjoy. __________________________________________________ He is the Alpha. I am the "runt". He is night. I am day. He is popular. I am the nerd. He likes me as his best friend. I love him more than that. When I found out that he was my mate, I was ecstatic and worried. Worried why? Well because, I Sam Carter was not something that people would call "mate" material and with too much baggage that I don't let on. So, when my mate told me that he didn't know if wanted me or not because I didn't "shift", I did the only thing I could think of. I left. And, on that journey, I learned more about myself, found some great friends, made some enemies, and learned about so called grandmother that was the same as me. He could either accept me or reject me, and he didn't choose yet. I don't know. Maybe I will choose for him, and I was sure that he wasn't going to like the answer. _______________________________________ NOTE: IF YOU READ THIS BOOK ON ANY OTHER APP BESIDES WATTPAD THEN IT IS COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT. I GAVE NO ONE PERMISSION TO USE MY BOOK AND HAVE NOT POSTED IT ANYWHERE ELSE, SO... YA. REPORT THAT BOOK. Thanks. ~Rissa

Human!Betelgeuse (Beetlejuice) x Reader by DontLookThisIsntReal

First year of college! Your major is undecided and you're mostly focusing on your core classes right now. Now this isn't going to be your classic "love at first sight" spiel. In fact it may just be the opposite. A/N: I'm excited to write this story! This is my first time writing fan fiction in three years so I hope I'm not too rusty. Please feel free to leave suggestions in the comments. I plan on making this a decently long story and I'll try to write as frequently as I can but I am busy a lot with school and working on finding a job. IMPORTANT NOTICE: There may be a few triggers and I will be sure to put them at the top of the chapter every time. Please do not ignore these. Please don't read the chapter anyways because you like the story. Your mental health is so much more important than some stupid xReader. Take care of yourself. I love all of you. Also I won't make any super dramatic changes unless a lot of people want them (i.e. killing off a character, breaking up couples, etc.)

The Revenge Wife (COMPLETE) by MaryRose_Author

"Let me put this very clear to you, because it looks like you're not fully understanding. I paid for you to be my wife, meaning as my wife you'll do what I say because I paid for it. You literally sold yourself to me, so now you're mine. Here take your check." He tossed the check to my face, by now I was making the biggest effort to not cry in front of him, but he wasn't over, he continued. "What were you expecting? This is what gold diggers like you get, money has a price and now you're paying yours.... Enjoy your money wife." And walked away, leaving me in the big living room speechless and watery eyed. I didn't move for probably twenty seconds, I never expected this. The amazing cover was created by: @bellegrace97 *****IMPORTANT PLEASE READ****** This book has strong scenes of physical and verbal abuse, read at your own risk. If you have a hard time dealing with this topic please do not read, and if you do please refrain yourself from leaving comments about how wrong violence is, we all know violence is unacceptable in any way shape or form. Never my intention writing this story was not to encourage violence or make anyone believe this is aceptable in a relationship. Once (1) in this story the word "rape" is mentioned, as part of the characters foreplay, not actual rape. However some some might feel is best not to say it in hopes to make this go away. If we don't say it we will prevent it from happening, kind of thing. If reading this word once triggers you just one bit please do not read this story. THIS IS JUST A STORY and my only purpose writing it was to ENTERTAIN not educate teenagers on basics values that should come from home on the first place. If you still find the need to waste your time and comment saying this book is delivering wrong ideas your comment will be deleted with the purpose of not ruining other people's experience. Before you start reading be aware that EVERY NEGATIVE AND OFFENSIVE COMMENT WILL GET YOU BLOCKED.

Spirals || Mattheo Riddle by mrxshxx

"I was reaching for stars that didn't exist, caught up in the fantasies born of willful hope. I threw myself in the path of fate because I wanted to be swept away." ... We do stupid, stupid things in the name of those we love. We dedicate ourselves to false promises and we hope that in the end, it all turns out alright. I was never the kind of person who jumped into things without thinking about the consequences. I never dreamed of what could come from some silly mistakes. Two new students come for their 6th year at Hogwarts. Neither of them particularly want to be there. What havoc could a witch and a dark wizard bring to the year? As they both become frustratingly curious about each other, things fall in place that might never have occurred if they had just never met. ... So I started this book because I was bored, and now it's kind of my life accomplishment weirdly enough. It's not perfect and definitely not what it started out as but this fic has parts of my heart and soul in it and I'm proud of how far it's come. Contains toxic but also lovable Mattheo Riddle and an emotionally relatable mc. !!!Finished updating but still doing some editing!!! *WARNING* Contains violence, sexual content, swearing, mentions of abuse, death and possibly more. *I do not own any of the Harry Potter characters, Mattheo Riddle belongs to @yasmineamara, I only own my own characters. Happy reading

Top!Akaza x Switch!Douma by sixpyramidheads

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Taekook Part 2 by urtotwriter

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The 'Rogue' at the End of the Tunnel

"I Alpha Jason Huntsman of the Blue Moon Pack reject you Esmeray Woodsmith of the Blue Moon pack as my mate." My knees feel weak and my whole body starts to tremble under this invisible force. My heart feels like shattered into a hundred pieces; my head starts throbbing like hit by a hundred-pound rock. Well, expected of the great Alpha of a jerk to reject the so-called weakling of the pack. But I do not let the scene unfold the way this arrogant fool of an Alpha wishes. I lift my chin, straighten my back, a hint of a smirk playing on my lips, I say much more arrogantly " I Esmeray Woodsmith of Blue Moon Pack except the rejection of Alpha Jason Huntsman of Blue Moon pack." =========== I wipe off the blood from my treasured dagger. And walk out of the Leader's Den, to face the people ready to accept me as their new Alpha. Well, not until recently was I rejected by my mate for being a right-hand man of a so-called Rogue leader. The one I just killed. And my new Beta calls out as I walk out of the Cabin's door. "We welcome our new leader the Rogue King." And that is when I decide to show myself to the world. And who knew I would be mated to the strongest female wolf I have ever come across. ======= Book#1 of "The Lost Princes" series.