"They Hurt Her"

"They Hurt Her"

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*Based off of a true story.* 17 year old girl Carmen Winstead once lived in Indianna. She was a loving and caring girl, but the day she moves everything turns for the worst. It's hard to adjust to a new life, especially when you're the new girl and no one wants to work hard to get to know you. But when she befriends a groupd of girls she hopes for the best, only to get the worst. Her so called newfound friends turn against her, and one cold winter day when the group of girls try to embarrass her during a fire drill by bulling her, she was killed. Days letter a chain letter goes around the internet, spreading the truth of her murder. Saying that if her killers come clean, she won't go after them. But if they don't, she has very much in store for them." *Rumor has it that an Urban Legend has came up saying that she came back from the dead and killed all of those girls in her act of revenge. This is my twist on her story.
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