You Stole my Heart

You Stole my Heart

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I'd love to tell you that this romance story is one where boy meets girl, girl falls in love with boy, they cling to each other like glue, and all is well in the world of romance. WRONG! Meet Kristen, a 14 year old teenager with a lot of problems. but, let's not dwell on those too much yet. Her only friend is her eight year old neighbor, Cassie, who has a sob story herself. I'd love to sugarcoat it all for you, but the truth is her dad's a drunk and her mom's a stoner...not the best duo. But this story is all about change (And suffering, kudos to the author...me.), so hope is not lost yet! Maybe getting kidnaped could do some good for her... oops, spoiler alert. Now meet Jax! (I know i'm the author and i'm supposed to not pick favorites but.......he's totally my favorite. Don't tell Kristen) Jax, is an out of the box kind of guy, with an out of the box kind of name. Even being kidnapped, something that would traumatize most teens, he still keeps his humor in tact. (So, he's like, totally swoon worthy) But, when push comes to shove, he's very protective,and of course brave. So, suffering through all odds, can this bunch make it through and ignore their differences, and fall madly in love with each other?(It is a romance story, so you never know) But, come on guys, not that there romance isn't buckoo important,but the real question is, can they survive the constant kidnap trials, or will they get there eyes stabbed out of their skulls and die? Read on to feed Jax's ego.
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A parody... except it slowly gets less satirical as I get way too attached to the characters and turn the story into a shipping-fest ~~~~ "Why are you doing this?" I whispered. He slammed me against another locker. I could see anger, sadness, envy, happiness and lust in his teal green orbs. "Because you're mine." He smirked, gnashing his teeth against mine. ~~~~ Brynn Winters is a 17 year old good girl. She is sweeter than sugar. She is also sarcastic and quirky and innocent and naive and snarky and is a bookworm and not like other girls. She also has trauma to (barely) compensate for her lack of personality. She believes in love but she has never experienced any, until she met him. Ryder Daniels is a 18 year old bad boy. He is sweeter than sin. He is dark and mysterious and plays football (not shown in book). He smokes and drinks beer. He is a ladies' man and a player. He has walls around his heart and some dark secrets that is definitely not spoiled in the title. He does not believe in love. Brynn and Ryder are opposites. So what happens when they meet? He is not who she thinks he is. Will it end in disaster? Or will it end in love? Will it end in flames? Or will it end in a different kind of flame? As disasters come their way, will they choose love or not love? Will their secrets drive them apart? Or will they trust in each other? Join them on their journey of love. There will be love, annoying sluts, conversations that doesn't pass the Bechdel test, cliche tropes, glaring plot holes, subtly glaring plot holes, socialism, orbs, humor, secondhand embarrassment and the tiniest hints of homoeroticism. ~~~~ Reviews (aka criticisms that I'm too lazy to correct): "From a horribly done parody to horribly done leftist propaganda." "Brynn and Ryder are the most frustrating couple I've ever read." "Where humor" "You can't use parody as an excuse for bad writing, you know."

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