Remiss
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Hey there,
'Remiss' here, is a poem about a man who loves a woman just so much, even after their separation. But as to their wrecked history, he decides to never be reunited with her, even with the knowledge that she loves him just as much as he does. And hence, he awaits with batted breath to just catch a glimpse of her as to everyday of today making a worthwhile journey of his life as well.
I hope you'd like it. :)
Stay amazing. :)
Love,
Pahi S.
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