Lady Jane ( Rewriting )
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Last published Fri, Jul 28, 2017
*** 2017 Aim High Awards Winner for Action/ Adventure ***
Someone once said the only way to succeed in life is by pushing forward and making your dreams a reality. As charming as this may sound, it's only partially true. How can you push to succeed in life when you have no way of knowing how it begins or how it ends. One drastic turn can change everything in a matter of seconds. But sometimes that's the push you need to become somebody. My name is Mary Jane, devoted wife, soon to be mother, I have everything I could have ever possibly wanted and more, but that one drastic night changed all that for me. I went into a downward spiral and now I'm doing all I can to pick up the pieces with the help of some powerful people " My family ", when your knocked in the dust and unsure where to turn sometimes a little danger is all you need to get back on your feet.
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