Jack (Revised)

Jack (Revised)

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After a lot of consideration, I've decided that the previous version of this story, as much as I'd written, anyway, was more of a foundation than a finished novel. The plot was shoddily connected, many of the parts I thought were good ended up serving the plot in no way, and it began to look more like a random jumble of chapters than a book. So, here we are, these realizations in mind and ready to revise. These are the steps I've taken so far. It's still the intended story of the original book, the same characters, the same motivations. But it'll feel so much better. Enjoy!
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Into the N109 Zone

Zayne, Xavier, and Rafayel decide to band together to go after the Main Lead in the N109 zone. It has been too long since her departure into the dangerous territory, and fearing for her safety, the three meet and band together to save her. Little do they know what dangers may await them and that the Main Lead is with none other than Onychinus' infamous leader, Sylus. *Disclaimer: I have played with this little fan-fic for quite a while now, and at the request of others to publish it for fun, I finally decided to. The majority of this story was written before the latest chapters from the game came out. Some of the ideas are also my own fan theories, and may not be perfectly matched to the story or what is Cannon, thus, keeping this story a fan-fic. Fan-fictions, in essence, are not always representative of the truths of what they are reflecting or about. There may be inconsistencies with the game and the lore, and those are liberties I have chosen to take to add my own twists to this story, and some things I have added are to help fill in the gaps for what we do not know yet or may suspect will happen in the future. It is meant to be a fun exploration of the characters and world and about how our MFL gets out of the N109 Zone and what would happen if all her "reverse harem" boys were to come in to save her. ;) One thing to note is that anything to do with the name or reference to our MFL character I have chosen to frame in brackets, ie [Her]. I decided to do this to leave our MFL "nameless" so that those reading can imagine their own version of their character and their character's name as they read. :) I have done this in short, little parts, or chapters, if you will, and am planning on releasing this chapter by chapter, as time permits me to do so. I hope you all find the story as fun and entertaining as I have in writing it.

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