Jack (Revised)
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After a lot of consideration, I've decided that the previous version of this story, as much as I'd written, anyway, was more of a foundation than a finished novel. The plot was shoddily connected, many of the parts I thought were good ended up serving the plot in no way, and it began to look more like a random jumble of chapters than a book. So, here we are, these realizations in mind and ready to revise. These are the steps I've taken so far. It's still the intended story of the original book, the same characters, the same motivations. But it'll feel so much better. Enjoy!
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