A W A K E - The Return Of Golem
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When I was younger I used to draw humans in the power puff girls style. I tried to make comics about these humans which were made in an actual lab-- they were just kids. Then after a year I decided to make a second one with them as teenagers. As to now in 2016, I have decided to make a possible book for these guys. Golem wasnt the original main character at first, but now he is. I'll take any forms of critcism that could help my writing.
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