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Continúa, Has publicado jul 25, 2016
Hey Guys wanted to give you all a sample of a novel I'm currently working on. I'm still working on a lot of it. So I hope you enjoy it and feed back on the book would be awesome thank you. I don't know how much of the book I will post but I know I properly won't post the last couple chapters. 

Anyways this story is about a war that breaks out against the main 4 kingdoms. the evil that leads this war is Drason who betrays his sister for the throne. Now his sister is hidden out in the forest with the other foresters and kingdom runaways. Will She stay hidden for ever or will she stand up and raise an army to defeat her brother, and take her kingdom back?.

I may edit the description later as I get more of the story done. Just a heads up I will most likely edit the book more as I get ready to send it to a publisher. Please feel free to comment and give some advice about parts of the book. I would love to hear from you all I hope you enjoy the book 

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