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Last published Mon, Sep 5, 2016
*Please read full description* I will now do reviewing requests. Much like topic talks this is for sharing my opinion. But, this is also for others who need help in the basic process of writing. These will contain spoilers for the stories I am reviewing. I will only review stories if I am given consent. So if you send me someone else's story then please, ask them before. This is because some people are very sensitive to criticism and might not appreciate it, and also because people might also just not like me talking about their works without them knowing. If the story you suggest is not done immediately please do not worry. It probably means I'm just backed up reviewing stories. Because I have to read them then write out a whole review which could take who knows how long. Also I do not want any mature stories suggested to me. I am a very high moral person, and I do not write, nor read that kind of content. If this excludes one of your stories I am sorry. But that's just my rule.
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