If Only She Knew

Hey yall!
So if only she knew is a story I'm currently working on. It takes place in a different world where the planets are all at peace, for now.

Somewhere unknown by millions, but known to it's inhabitants lie a system in space consisting of five planets. A treaty was set up so that all five planets could remain safe and in peace. The planets consisted of Tama. Tama was ruled by Rogliry Rankov, who served as their dictator. Out of the five planets in this system Tama was the one to cause the most problems. It's inhabitants deceiving and savage like, quick to turn against an ally. Tamanians were pale, lanky, tall, and have straight blonde or brown hair. Seemingly normal to the eye, but being able to blend well in whatever surroundings they were in. All Tamanians were born with a distinct ability, to help them survive on their planet.

Please check it out, I'm excited to hear some positive feedback.