The Surgeon
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MatureOngoing5m
Last published Wed, Jul 27, 2016
Hi Everyone,
I'm new to the community and a budding amateur writer. I wanted to share an opening piece of a story idea that I came up with while brainstorming.
This story is set around 50,000 years in the future and the genre is SciFi.
Any constructive comments are welcome !
Cheers and I hope someone finds this a bit interesting :D
More to come hopefully.
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