Dylan's Auto Repair Shop

This story is about a girl named Jade that lives alone with her brother after her parents died. She is a total tomboy and badass chick. She skateboards, dances hip-hop, loves cars, is a boxer, owns a motorcycle, and works with her brother at his auto repair shop. While working there she meets a boy named Tristan. he is the typical cocky, rude, sexist, player which just so happens to be the main male in this story. What will happen when Jade finds out about how her parents actually died and her brothers life. (Sorry if its not this is not that good of a story info but this is my first story an I'm not entirely sure what to do. Please give it a shot and give me your honest opinions)