Ambivalence [p.h.] - EDITING
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Complete, First published Jul 31, 2016
book one of the ambivalence trilogy 
      
      I look at him.
        
        "I don't want to kill anyone either.  Trust me.  But I'd do it if it would make you feel better."

        He pulls me to a stop near the railing of the chasm.  The Pit's glass ceiling is letting through rays of dusk, with mesmerizing rays of oranges and pinks lighting up the otherwise blackened stone.  I can't focus on anything else though; Peter's eyes are too intense.  They're like green lasers burning into my cerulean sea irises, like the sun reaching through a lens to start a fire.  

        "Jax."
        
        I tear my eyes away.
        "Four told me you heard," I blurt out.  "What I said in my fear landscape."
        
        "I did," Peter confirms.  I squeeze my eyes shut and wait for the storm to pass.  

        "Why do you seem so scared?  Do I scare you, Jax?"
        
        "No," I breathe.
        
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