The Man in the Checkered Suit
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The man in the checkered suit, is a story about a man in the 1940's who always dreamed of joining the Mafia. But as an initiation, he is required to pull a shady deal with a specificly strange customer. If you're a fan of horror, macabre, or the unknown this will be a great read for you.
Hello, this is my first story that I wrote. The genre is creepypasta, but before I submit it to the main site, I want to get your feedback. Please feel free to comment and tell me how you thought if the story, and how I can improve it in any way. Be brutally honest. :)
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