Is Your OC a Mary Sue?
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Hello and welcome to "Is Your OC a Mary Sue?"
I will be (try!) to be kind and will rate your OCs from:
-Original Fandoms
-Wings Of Fire (NO SPOILERS PAST BOOK 3 OR I WILL NOT RATE IT!!)
-Warrior Cats
-Seekers
-The Hunger Games (I just read it and it is AMAZING)
-The Maze Runner
-My Little Pony FiM
-My Little Pony Equestria Girls (why..)
-Avengers/ Super Heroes/ DC/ Marvel
-Joke Sues
Send your OCs in the comments or PM them to me and I will rate them on the three following factors:
-Originality,
-Sue-Scale
-Porkchop
"But Sivi!" you say, "What does that mean?"
Well, dear reader, look inside to find out!
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