Something deep and cutting edge

A story I have just thought about I want to go from a reader to a writer see what I can write as I have gotten a fair bit older, if my writing is trash tell me please so I'll stop making trash and move back to making music thanks krypton,

As of 29/03/2017 I have revived this story its pretty good imo. But i'd like you guys to read it I have left the first chapter as it was how every many years ago I started writing this. now I have built on it have three chapters done I will try to release as many as I can as quickly as I can. kryptonex