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My thoughts when I was reading the infamous bad fanfic "My Immortal" by Tara Gilesbie.Public Domain

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The Enemy |Harry Potter 1️⃣ by emilys_chapters

Draco's sister comes to Hogwarts and after arriving late she has already gathered the attention of quite a few boys. Will any of them catch her attention or will she continue to live like a Malfoy should- cold hearted and Brutal. *IN NEED OF SIRIUS EDITING* *COMPLETED* Written: 2020 IF FOUND ON ANY OTHER PLATFORM BESIDES WATTPAD PLEASE REPORT IMMEDIATELY AS IT IS COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT. THANK YOU Hit 15k on 23rd August 2021 Hit 20k on 29th October 2021 Hit 28k on 7th April 2022 Hit 42k on 27th December 2023 Hit 50k on 1st December 2025 Hit 60k on 25th October 2025 __________________ OC x Harry Potter __________________ IG: Emilys_chapters I do not own any of the Harry Potter franchise. J. K. Rowling had no part in the publishing of this book. These are original ideas along with the main character and they belong to and have been created by me. ******************************************

The Heir by heylolittaheyy

"𝐈 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐲𝐨𝐮'𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐫𝐲," 𝐬𝐚𝐲𝐬 𝐃𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐨 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐬𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐨𝐧 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐟𝐚𝐜𝐞, 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐝𝐞𝐞𝐩 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐦𝐲 𝐞𝐲𝐞𝐬. "𝐈'𝐦 𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐫𝐲 𝐛𝐞𝐜𝐚𝐮𝐬𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐝𝐨𝐧'𝐭 𝐛𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐞𝐯𝐞 𝐦𝐞," 𝐇𝐢𝐬 𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐥𝐢𝐩𝐬 𝐮𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐫 𝐦𝐲 𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐦𝐲 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐛𝐞𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐝, 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐥𝐝 𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬 𝐨𝐧 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐦𝐲 𝐬𝐤𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐛𝐥𝐞. "𝐘𝐨𝐮 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥 𝐦𝐞 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐈 𝐟𝐮𝐜𝐤 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐨𝐮𝐥 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮," 𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐲𝐬, 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐯𝐨𝐜𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐬𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐟𝐚𝐜𝐞. ________ Contains: •Theo Nott x Draco Malfoy romances •love triangle x threesomes •Enemies to lovers •Dancing with the enemy •GIFS and photos •started: 13.1.2021 •ended: 1.4.2021 Trigger warning: This book contains mature content like sex descriptions, language, violence, sexual and physical abuse, death. If you're not comfortable with that, don't read. No translations allowed. Highest ranking: #1 in Draco #1 in Lorenzozurzolo #1 in Maturescenes #1 in Pansyparkinson #1 in Hogwarts #1 in Slytherin #1 in Potter #1 in Voldemortsdaughter #1 in Mature scenes #1 in Snape #1 in Theonott

My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie by KanOfSoda

DISCLAIMER: This is a re-upload of the fanfiction, for archival purposes, as well as shits and giggles. I did not write the story. Welcome to My Immortal, the worst fanfiction in all of human history. Written by a goffik gurl named Tara Gilesbie AKA XXXbloodyrists666XXX, she doesnt know jack shit about Harry Potter, and everyone is literally goffik. Join the adventures of Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, a Mary Sue vampire at Hogwarts as she gushes over her boyfriend Draco and goes to MCR concerts!

Is it a lie (oc x Draco) by darylsecretlover

Before I say anything else. This is a short story I had to write for my Harry Potter class in 10th grade. Evelyn Potter had just lost her last family. Her god father. With all this going on with a new school year. She under the idea that an enemy as became a death eater. Draco malfoy. She comes up with a plan to see if he is. By becoming his friend. What happens when they actually fall for eachother?

Slytherin Tears by MalfoyFamily_

From the good to the bad, everyone's favorite Slytherin princess, Rowan Bailey; seems like princess, isn't so innocent after all. + A book that takes unexpected turns of events. + More than just your regular mature fanfiction. [Mature Content; Viewer Discretion is Advised; This book is semi-slow burn, but once the mature content appears, it's very frequent.| Lot's of sensitive topics, please be aware.| A.N; I do not own any of these characters or Harry Potter; all credit goes to J.K ROWLING.

My Immortal but make it Ranboo by saline__flwrr

suffering. a crackfic parody of the infamous self-insert fanfic My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie but with all of dsmp (tara needs so much fucking therapy holy shit) yes we included every single dsmp member thats how many characters are in this godforsaken thing if any of the content creators mentioned arent cool with this, we will gladly delete :D dnf so funny haha :|

My Immortal by falklandimmigrant

My Immortal, a stark and bright example of what truly a bad fanfiction is. While Tara Gilesbie may-or-may-not be a real person; this truly horrid and hilarious Harry Potter Alternative Universe fanfiction that was posted to Fanfiction.net in 2006 is as real as it gets. Featuring our main protagonist, Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, and her love..square--hexagon between Hagrid, Draco and Vampire Potter. Featuring flavourful characters such as Satan and Tom Riddle--this story is sure to make you laugh until you cry. Do keep in mind that Tara, the original author has made multiple spelling errors that I've kept in due to authenticity for the original work. Also keep in mind that I *am* putting this under the mature rating; so you youngins keep that it mind. - FI :]

My Immortal rewrite by PuppyBaby15

Of course the original does not belong to me it belongs to Tara Gilesbie. She apparently watched all the movies and such. So I decided to challenge myself and my talents to see if I can make a way better version w/o reading or watching anything HP.

Switching Sides | Cedric Diggory vs. Fred Weasley by cdk1031

*WARNING! This book contains mature themes such as drinking, drug use, explicit language, mentions of suicide, sexual content, abuse, and more. Please read at your own risk.* Vermilion "Millie" Barrett goes into her sixth year at Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry in a stable, happy relationship with Fred Weasley. Everything is fine until Fred starts acting weird and suddenly breaks up with her. She's completely heartbroken until a certain "intolerable" Hufflepuff comes up with a plan to make Fred jealous and win him back, but what happens when they start spending more time together than intended? Where will Millie's feelings take her? Will Fred ever go back to Millie? The plot doesn't follow any specific books, but all of the tidbits of the wizarding world still apply! I only own the OC's (Vermillion, Killian, etc.) and the plot. All other characters and magical things are owned by J.K. Rowling. Started 12/2/20 Finished 7/4/21

Devils Kiss -•- draco malfoy by warprose

"I wish Voldermort killed baby me, would have made my life a whole lot easier" •BOOK TRAILER• *I understand how cringy this book is; I'm in the process of editing it!* *Goblet of Fire*

My Immortal (Original: XXXbloodyrists666XXX) by PieceOfCheeseUwU

This is a unedited repost of the infamous Harry Potter fanfiction "My Immortal" by XXXbloodyrists666XXX (whose real name is probably Tara Gilesbie, who has said that she wrote it as a troll fic) I DO NOT CLAIM TO HAVE WRITTEN THIS STORY, IT IS NOT MINE AND I HAVE NO OWNERSHIP OF THE CHARACTERS NOR THE PLOT. PLEASE DON'T REPORT THIS BOOK. The fanfiction was first written and posted on FanFiction.net, but has since been deleted. Because Wattpad is a much more popular platform, I decided to repost it on here so more people can appreciate this story. My Immortal is a Harry Potter-based fan fiction serially published on FanFiction.net between 2006 and 2007. Known for its incomprehensible narrative and constant digressions, the story centers on a non-canonical female vampire character named "Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way" and her relationships with the characters of the Harry Potter series, particularly her romantic relationship with Draco Malfoy. Ultimately, she is prompted by visions to travel back in time to try to defeat the main antagonist of the series, Lord Voldemort. (Wikipedia) There are 44 chapters of My Immortal, Tara went on a break from writing after chapter 44 but never returned to write the last chapters, so it ends on a bit of a cliffhanger, sorry. I made the Authors notes to be in italics to make them more distinguishable, to my knowledge, Tara herself didn't do that in her story. The AN's from the hacker in chapter 39 are in bold and italics. The original chapter 39 was posted in both chapter 39 and 40 so you can skip part 40 (the authors notes are different though) Trigger warnings: Sex, self harm, suicide, death I'm working on a "translation" so people who get put off by the grammar and spelling errors in the story can still enjoy it😊 (not sure who made the cover, but it's really well done haha) Have fun reading!

The Marriage Law by Jeon_mimi_0101

"𝘛𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘴 𝘔𝘢𝘥𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴! " "𝘗𝘰𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳." "𝘉𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘥𝘺 𝘙𝘪𝘥𝘪𝘤𝘶𝘭𝘰𝘶𝘴! " "𝘗𝘰𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳! " "𝘈𝘣𝘴𝘰𝘭𝘶𝘵𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘬𝘦𝘳𝘴, 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘮i-" "𝘗𝘖𝘛𝘛𝘌𝘙!! " " 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵? " " 𝘪𝘵'𝘴 𝘎𝘳𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘦𝘳. " I've wanted to write this for a long time and here's my first shot in hp universe 🙂 I don't own characters and photos. they belong to JKR and photographers respectfully. all I own is my imagination and fingers, i.e. , storyline. This is a Dramionarry fic. (draco×hermione×harry) No character bashing. Mature. Especially in second half. Totally explicit content. You've been warned. yeah, enjoy it guys!

Stone Cold (Draco x Reader) by covetedburn

Life in Hogwarts was not as easy as you thought it would be. You were a very welcomed Hufflepuff in your first year because of your parents' reputation even though you're rather comfortable being alone and invisible covered in muggle books so the other kids didn't know you exist. The one thing you ever least expected was to be mentally bullied by none other than the school's most despised kid, Mr. Draco Malfoy. *Disclaimer: The characters and the story are based on JK Rowling's Harry Potter series. Please vote if you like the story! ❤ Thanks for reading! COMPLETE

If I told you I loved you by annemaliene

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The Phoenix by s1y7h3r1nn

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Everything Wrong With: My Immortal by StorySins

My Immortal: widely regarded as the worst piece of fanfiction ever written, EVER! But we here at StorySins weren't happy with that assumption, and so we decided to test it! Here are the results. No spelling mistake goes unpunished. No assault to the reader's basic human decency goes un-snarked at. So come on and join Harry Potter, Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way, Professor Snap [sic] and all your old favorites for EVERYTHING Wrong With My Immortal.

original my beloved evelyn ~ fred weasley by xssunflowerrx

all rights to Harry Potter belong to JK Rowling. I do not own the majority of these characters. Evelyn Malfoy is the oldest daughter of the Malfoy family. She was a student of Beauxbatons but was expelled and began attending Hogwarts with Fred Weasley as classmate, whom she'd avoided as her family hated his and she felt a need to do so aswell. The two both disliked one another and teased the other and somehow, slowly but surely, grew to be friends and through the years began to be more. The two (and George of course) go through the plot lines of Harry Potter while having their own story together. (possible) trigger warnings: language, physical violence, drinking please comment if anything in this story requires a tw that I've missed started: december 27th, 2020 completed: april 30th, 2021 editing started: october 10th, 2021 ended: stopped © xssunflowerrx {2020}

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