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My thoughts when I was reading the infamous bad fanfic "My Immortal" by Tara Gilesbie.Public Domain

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My Immortal: The Funny Re-Imagined Edition by meowkels

My humorous rendition/parody of the infamous Harry Potter fanfiction, "My Immortal" by Tara Gilespie. If you thought the original story was batshit insane...think again!

Evelyn Riddle and the Chamber of Secrets by eurydices_wife

"Curse you, Dad." After Harry basically murdered a man who had Voldemort on the back of his head, I thought this year couldn't be any crazier. Well, Petrified students and the Heir of Slytherin proved me wrong. After an ordinary Halloween night went terribly wrong, I knew this year wasn't going to be normal. Rumors about the Chamber of Secrets and theories about who was the Heir of Slytherin started to arise, but it seemed that most people were suspecting my best friend, Harry Potter - which meant we only had so long to prove it wasn't him before the school closed down. Illegal potion brewing, a suspicious diary, and spiders hiding a giant secret - you bet this year was insane. [ book two of the riddle's daughter series ]

Witch Hunt (Re-written) by HumanoidAlien27

Another fanfic I thought about for a while that sort of took a life of its own. It's dark, painful and bitter at times. Though I hope you enjoy it.

The Immortal Prince ✔️ by Midika

"Tomorrow, we don't have to speak of this again." I hardly know what I'm asking. I just know I want whatever it is. He watches me with an intensity only he is capable of. "Put my hand where you want me to touch you." **** Vaela should never have gone up that mountain. She should never have tried to find the Immortal Prince. But she did, and now she's mortal in a land of immortals, fighting to find her mate in order to save her own life. Yet the handsome, seductive Prince trying to save her life is getting in her way. How can she concentrate on finding her true mate when she is confined to his home, unable to resist him? Unless, of course, he is the answer to all her problems. *Mature Content! Read at your own discretion!* - Stand-alone (within the Immortal Sin's Series Universe)

narnia + harry potter imagines by hufflepuff-writings

a collection of imagines from my tumblr, @/hufflepuff-writings

Fear Of The Water ~ Draco Malfoy by CheerfulAugust

If this was meant for me, why does it hurt so much? And if you're not made for me, why did we fall in love? *Following the Half-Blood Prince book.

My Immortal (Koreaboo Version) by _angelghost

Please read disclaimer before reading. Welcome to a new (and equally as cringey) take on the infamous Harry Potter fanfiction, My Immortal. Enjoy!

Is it a lie (oc x Draco) by darylsecretlover

Before I say anything else. This is a short story I had to write for my Harry Potter class in 10th grade. Evelyn Potter had just lost her last family. Her god father. With all this going on with a new school year. She under the idea that an enemy as became a death eater. Draco malfoy. She comes up with a plan to see if he is. By becoming his friend. What happens when they actually fall for eachother?

The King Of All Vampire Kings (Book 1) ✔️ by S0NDREENJ

Book 1 of (The Awakening Series) {#1 Supernatural} {#1 Paranormal} {#1 Lycans} {#1 Vampire Romance} {#5 Royalty} The world went to shit long before I was born. Humans like me use to believe other species were nothing more than fictional characters, myths, or figures of one's imagination. But that was before vampires left the shadows and decided to reveal their species to the world. I've been told that teenage girls use to fantasize about being swooshed off their feet by those mysterious creatures. Insane. Matter of fact, insane would be an understatement, they were fucking lunatics. Vampires are not some fictional character that would love you like no other. No, vampires are not some sort of myth, and they most certainly are not, a figment of anyone's imagination. They are very real, and they despise the human race. In fact, they have enslaved my entire species and formed a new world. Each continent is owned by a ruthless, bloodsucking, barbaric, the vampire king. Every single one of them has played a part in the war of the awakening, showing no mercy, killing without question. Humans didn't even stand a chance. Our army and world leaders were killed or imprisoned in less than a couple of days. They slaughtered my race, but it didn't stop there. No, that was only the beginning of human suffering. Trust me when I say the death was truly a kindness, because anyone who survived the awakening, would beg for death. I was positive that my suffering would come to an end when I turned eighteen. I was hoping and praying to be marked as a feeder, nothing more, nothing less. Death was the only way out of this world. You see, all of the kings who ruled over the earth were cruel and calculating. They are all tyrants in their own right and they all answered to one vampire. Who was known as the most barbaric of them all and I was marked as his chosen. The King of all Vampire Kings. Cover Created By:Autumn Sewell (Currently Being Edited by: Iryshlily

The Phoenix by s1y7h3r1nn

When strong emotions meet a dormant line of ancient magic that was thought to of gone extinct resurfaced along with the Dark Lord, everyone is on edge... THIS IS A DRACO MALFOY FAN FICTION TW:⚠️ SMUT ⚠️ -bad language - viewer discretion advised

Devils Kiss -•- draco malfoy by warprose

"I wish Voldermort killed baby me, would have made my life a whole lot easier" •BOOK TRAILER• *I understand how cringy this book is; I'm in the process of editing it!* *Goblet of Fire*

After All This Time// Sebastian Sallow x Reader Hogwarts Legacy Fanfiction by c0nfring0

Note: If you like this story, go and read my Ominis x Reader fanfic titled 'No Choice But You'! ---------- After everything that happened in your fifth year, you and Sebastian struggle to understand what you feel for each other. It's their seventh year, and you're both turning 18. It's been so long since you've talked to each other- since you've seen each other. Once again, he's the only thing on your mind, and you're not sure what to do about it. How are you supposed to know if he likes you back after all that happened? As you navigate the social aspects of your seventh year, other sinister plots are brewing, right under your nose. It seems that some of Isadora's stored magic has found its way out into the world and men that used to work for Rookwood are attempting to harness it like Ranrok had tried before. You and your friends have to come together and try to stop them before it's too late. ---------- This is a Sebastian x Reader fan fiction. I do not own any of the characters or copyrights for this world. In the story, y/n is a fem MC who is in Slytherin. DON'T FORGET TO GIVE STARS IF YOU'RE ENJOYING IT!! TRIGGER WARNINGS (ratings with how much of each type of content is included): -Strong depictions of violence and gore (7/10) -Some spicy content (7/10) -PTSD, flashbacks, and trauma discussion (9/10) -Drugs and Alcohol (3-4/10) -Some Foul language (1-2/10) If any of these topics are uncomfortable for you, please proceed with caution.

Draco Malfoy Imagines by foreverinadais

The title says it all ;) Generally another obsession of mine. Enjoy!

My Immortal but make it Ranboo by saline__flwrr

suffering. a crackfic parody of the infamous self-insert fanfic My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie but with all of dsmp (tara needs so much fucking therapy holy shit) yes we included every single dsmp member thats how many characters are in this godforsaken thing if any of the content creators mentioned arent cool with this, we will gladly delete :D dnf so funny haha :|

love or lust? Tom Riddle x Reader by kalyamalfpy

"oh y/n, what a foolish girl.." STARTED: May 26, 2024 FINISHED: N/A Hi everyone ! this is my first book so please bear with me..i love tom riddle and wanted to make this a oc book but, i love when tom riddle books are x reader soo , ya ! there will be sensitive topics like smut, blood, violence, self-harm. please feel free to reach out if you are in need of support, you are loved, please keep that in mind. i will put warnings for whenever there will be a sensitive topic. love you all !

Apocalypse and You | Dramione by sixth_senses

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Slytherin Tears by MalfoyFamily_

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My Immortal: The Funny Re-Imagined Edition cover

Evelyn Riddle and the Chamber of Secrets cover

Witch Hunt (Re-written) cover

The Immortal Prince ✔️ cover

narnia + harry potter imagines cover

Fear Of The Water ~ Draco Malfoy cover

My Immortal (Koreaboo Version) cover

Is it a lie (oc x Draco) cover

The King Of All Vampire Kings (Book 1) ✔️ cover

The Phoenix cover

Devils Kiss -•- draco malfoy cover

After All This Time// Sebastian Sallow x Reader Hogwarts Legacy Fanfiction cover

Draco Malfoy Imagines cover

My Immortal but make it Ranboo cover

love or lust? Tom Riddle x Reader cover

Apocalypse and You | Dramione cover

Slytherin Tears cover

Blood Magic - Golden Trio Era cover

My Immortal: The Funny Re-Imagined Edition

My humorous rendition/parody of the infamous Harry Potter fanfiction, "My Immortal" by Tara Gilespie. If you thought the original story was batshit insane...think again!