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My Immortal with Commentary
VioletKingston
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  • Reads 52,621
  • Votes 1,812
  • Parts 39
  • Time 2h 13m
VioletKingston
Ongoing, First published Aug 06, 2016
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My thoughts when I was reading the infamous bad fanfic "My Immortal" by Tara Gilesbie.
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