The Abondon House

The Abondon House

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This is my first story here on wattpad but I know it will come out great my story is a mix in between horror and adventure. I love reading and writting stories. This story takes place in 2017 on a fall day and a girl is dared to go in to a house by a few "fake" freinds and some werid and creepy thing"s happen in that old house but she dose it because shes desperate to make more freinds since she only has one friend. good luck and enjoy the book!!! Oh, by the way I'm still not the greatest at grammer or spelling so if u see any mistakes let me know just please don't be rude. I will also have little author notes off and on hope you don't mind. Any ideas to make my story better will be awesome since im still learning techniques. Enjoy! Sorry I also gotta say this book has a slow start but it gets pretty violent close to the middle. I am only 16 though so I'm still learning so any ideas I'm intersted.
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Moving In

Blaze White is the New Girl at the Prep school in her mothers old home town. But her only goal for senior year is to keep a low profile, no friends, no parties and NO boys. Axel may be adored and worshipped by his peer-but he hates people, except 5. So when a beautiful but closed off girl suddenly enters his group. He is not welcoming of the mysterious beauty despite the pull they both feel. •••• WARNING: This was written many moons ago. I have decided to put it back up because of a large request from readers. However, I was a kid when I wrote this so take it with a grain of salt. *** Like a deer in head lights, I freeze and watch as the car comes towards me expecting to get hit. But to my surprise, the car swerves to the side slightly next to me and comes to a stop. I take a deep breath I didn't know I was holding at the driver's side door swings open and a very pissed off Axel steps out. "Thank god," I mumble and place my hands on my knees to catch my breath. "Blaze?" He says and I hate it. I hate how he says my name as if it's his. Like he knows it's the only thing I want to hear, him calling out to me, looking at me, focused to me. It's the first time in my life I wanted someone's attention so badly I didn't care how I got it. And that was too dangerous for me to hold onto. "Are you insane or some shit? I could have killed you!" He says and starts to walk towards me. I take a big breath and step back away from him, "s-stop! Axel," I stutter still panting. It's then he notices the blood on my hands and shirt. "Is that blood?" He asks staring at my shirt and I take another step back. "Stop, stay b-back," I try to say confidently but I can't even breath right. Realizing he won't listen I start to turn around planning to make a break for it. "Don't run from me Blaze it won't go well," he growls reading my thoughts causing me to freeze in my spot. "Do not ever think you can get away from me."

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