The Last Element

The Last Element

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(The Element That Should Never Be Revealed have been renamed!!!) Long ago, a kingdom name Arsia, was attacked by an element that should never be revealed. As that element destroy everything, the queen hidden from the war trying to protect her princesses. So the queen sent the Princesses to earth along some guardians. The queen wish them to have a normal life until the right time has come. While the girls are having a normal life, somehow the element found them, and everything is revealed. What will happen to the princesses? What will happen to Arsia? And who are these guardians? READ AND FIND OUT>
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Emblems

((Originally, Phoenix)) “Leave me alone!” Her form flickered in the dim light. The brothers shared a look. “All right,” one started. “Just let us say something first. We know you have powers; we can sense them on you. We can do this because we have powers too. We call it magic. If you want, we can show you.” “Prove it then.” ~^~^~^~^~ There was a monster inside of her – a dark thing that always tried to claw its way out, ripping her insides to shreds as it went. She found no relief from it, maybe because she had no happy memories to find solace in, nor anyone to find comfort in. And yet, Amber could be the catalyst to setting a series of events that had been prophesied centuries before, into motion, bringing together three more people – the embodiments of the Emblems – to bring magic back to life. But in this underlying world of Adepts, Demons and secrets within secrets, unlocking their potential will be harder than you think. ~^~^~^~^~^ So, this is my 2014 Nanowrimo story, which is basically an attempt to rewrite Phoenix, where it shall go through major changes in plot, characters as well as effects of my new-and-improved writing style. I hope you enjoy it, and please give constructive criticism! {Also, the cover is temporary, till I find someone who can help me with it :P}

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