The Downfall of a Sue
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Last published Sun, Dec 18, 2011
A Mary Sue or Gary Stu (male form) is often either a perfect or almost perfect character. They often appear in fan fictions and are sometimes based on the author themselves
Thank you, Urban Dictionary. The story at hand is about a normal teen. Maybe it's me. Or you, who cares. This story is about our side character, Illania S. Darkfire. She is the most amazing piece of work since Jesus Christ. She is nearly perfect, to everyone but our main character. Our pritagonist sees what Illania is doing to the town and how she is destroying everyone's lives, and decides to take on this goddess. Who the hell else will?
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