A Dream?

This was a story I wrote in high school for my literature class senior year. All you need to know is that it's a gothic frame horror story slightly inspired by an album called "A Place Where the Sun is Silent" and "The Emptiness" by Alesana which were based by Dante's "Inferno" and Poe's "Annabel Lee" respectively. The main inspiration for this story was from Edgar Allan Poe along with whatever story I'll do after this.