I wrote this story as an assignment for school last year. Let's just say I was in a rush to get it turned in on time, so I was writing it at midnight when I was tired. So let's make this a judgement free zone. However, I don't mind you laughing at it because I even did. Also, I actually would've got a 3.8 on this if I didn't turn it in a tiny bit late, and I'm in advanced writing so we're graded harder. Point is, my teacher must've thought it wasn't as bad as I thought. Disclaimer: I never edited after writing it the first time, yet I still got it in late, and I still haven't edited it. I realize that there will be commas in the wrong spots, etc.