A Near-Death Experience

This short story is based on a true story except for the ending. It was one my first works (written in 2014), so it's not as good as my recent work. It's by me and my other friend. All characters are real, but with different names.

May, Brandy, Kai, and Albert had been having an amazing time at band camp. They decided to be adventurous and go outside to explore, but their whole day turned around when they decided to go to the lake...