Mary Sue Detector!
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Worried that your OC is too... Unoriginal? Perfect? Boring? Well here is your answer! Just fill out the form in the first chapter about your character, and I will use the (completely legit) Mary Sue Detector! (Also works on Gary Stus).
A Mary Sue is an unrealistic and seemingly perfect character, often not very original.
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𝑏𝑒𝑐𝑎𝑢𝑠𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢𝑟 𝑘𝑖𝑠𝑠 𝑖𝑠 𝑜𝑛 𝑚𝑦 𝑙𝑖𝑠𝑡 𝑜𝑓 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑏𝑒𝑠𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑔𝑠 𝑖𝑛 𝑙𝑖𝑓𝑒 [ʏᴏᴜ ᴡᴇʀᴇ ᴀ ᴄʟᴏsᴇ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ ᴏғ ɢᴀʀʏ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡʏᴀᴛᴛ. ᴏɴᴇ ɴɪɢʜᴛ ᴀᴛ ᴡʏᴀᴛᴛ's ʜᴏᴜsᴇ, ᴛʜᴇ ᴛᴡᴏ ʙᴏʏs ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇᴅ ᴀ ᴡᴏᴍᴀɴ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴄʜᴀɴɢᴇᴅ] wyattdonnellyxfem!reader started | 12.20.20 finished | 08.20.22Complete
Cosmo's oneshots / drabbles
This will consist of short multi-part stories, or most of the time just oneshots. will mostly be object show characters probably, and I will specify if the characters belong to me or not.
The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist
My second Mary-Sue series revolving around specific complaints most people would declare as Mary-Sueish or considered as bad writing, which I don't agree with. This series includes: Writing solely in second person Using cliches or writing self-inserts Plot revolving around getting sucked into an alternative universe OCs paired up Canon characters OCs being related to Canon characters Powers of controlling all of the elements, a sudden surge of powers, and having or gaining wings Having a character come back to life, having musical talents, numerous hobbies, and knowing various languages Stories containing elderly characters that appear youthful Stories containing only "hot" characters Characters with multi-colored hair Characters with a lack of scars on a fighter The "sudden" surge of Japanese characters in stories Princesses vs Rebellious tomboy girls and girlish boys and macho girls Characters that cut, are into drugs or alcohol Characters with mental and emotional disorders, diseases, disabilities Characters whose bodies or souls are inhabited by other beings such as angels or demons Characters who use sex as an outlet The symptoms of lust Rule-breaking genresComplete
𝘿𝙀𝘼𝘿𝙇𝙔 𝙊𝘽𝙎𝙀𝙎𝙎𝙄𝙊𝙉 || 𝙅𝙀𝙊𝙉 𝙅𝙐𝙉𝙂𝙆𝙊𝙊𝙆
𝘼 𝙈𝙖𝙛𝙞𝙖 𝙍𝙤𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚 " 𝙇𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙞𝙨 𝙖𝙣 𝘼𝙧𝙩. 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙙𝙧𝙖𝙬 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙞𝙘𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚 𝙝𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙩𝙡𝙮, 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙞𝙩'𝙡𝙡 𝙗𝙚 𝙡𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙡𝙮. " ~ 𝘼𝙇𝙀𝘾𝙏𝙍𝙊𝙉𝘼 𝙀𝙑𝘼𝙉𝙎 🦋💐🖌️ " 𝙎𝙪𝙣 ! 𝘼𝙛𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙖 𝙇𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝘿𝙖𝙧𝙠 𝙉𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 , 𝙢𝙮 𝙡𝙞𝙛𝙚 𝙨𝙚𝙚𝙨 𝙖 𝙗𝙚𝙖𝙪𝙩𝙞𝙛𝙪𝙡 𝙨𝙪𝙣𝙧𝙞𝙨𝙚! 𝙄'𝙡𝙡 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙡𝙚𝙩 𝙞𝙩 𝙨𝙚𝙩 𝙖𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣! 𝙄 𝙙𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙠𝙣𝙤𝙬 𝙞𝙛 𝙞𝙩 𝙘𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙨 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙊𝙧 𝙈𝙮 𝘿𝙀𝘼𝘿𝙇𝙔 𝙊𝘽𝙎𝙀𝙎𝙎𝙄𝙊𝙉, 𝘽𝙪𝙩 𝙄'𝙡𝙡 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙡𝙚𝙩 𝙢𝙮 𝙨𝙪𝙣 𝙜𝙤 𝙖𝙬𝙖𝙮 ! 𝙄 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙡𝙚𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙜𝙤 𝙎𝙪𝙣! " ~ 𝙅𝙀𝙊𝙉 𝙅𝙐𝙉𝙂𝙆𝙊𝙊𝙆 🥂👄🔪 𝙒𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙝𝙖𝙥𝙥𝙚𝙣 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙖 𝙙𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙨 𝙈𝙖𝙛𝙞𝙖 𝙜𝙚𝙩 𝙙𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙡𝙮 𝙤𝙗𝙨𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙗𝙚𝙖𝙪𝙩𝙞𝙛𝙪𝙡 𝙬𝙞𝙛𝙚? 𝘼 𝙙𝙖𝙧𝙠 𝙧𝙤𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙗𝙤𝙤𝙠 𝙞𝙩 𝙞𝙨. 𝙈𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝘼𝙝𝙚𝙖𝙙. 𝙍𝙚𝙖𝙙 𝙖𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙤𝙬𝙣 𝙧𝙞𝙨𝙠. 𝙄𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪'𝙧𝙚 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙞𝙣 𝙨𝙢𝙪𝙩 𝙟𝙪𝙨𝙩 𝙨𝙠𝙞𝙥 𝙞𝙩. 𝙐𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧 𝙖𝙣𝙮 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙙𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣𝙨 𝙞𝙩 𝙘𝙖𝙣'𝙩 𝙗𝙚 𝙘𝙤𝙥𝙞𝙚𝙙 𝙤𝙧 𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙣𝙨𝙡𝙖𝙩𝙚 .Complete
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𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐀𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐲𝐚𝐡 𝐓𝐡𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐬𝐨𝐧 𝐣𝐨𝐢𝐧𝐬 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐚 𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐲 𝐚𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐖𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐨𝐧𝐬' 𝐥𝐨𝐝𝐠𝐞, 𝐚 𝐜 𝐫𝐮𝐞𝐥 𝐩𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐤 𝐨𝐧 𝐇𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐚𝐡 𝐖𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐨𝐧 𝐠𝐨𝐞𝐬 𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐫𝐢𝐛𝐥𝐲 𝐰𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐠. 𝐀 𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐥𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐫, 𝐀𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐲𝐚𝐡 𝐫𝐞𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐨𝐝𝐠𝐞, 𝐡𝐚𝐮𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐠𝐮𝐢𝐥𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐨𝐩𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐜𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞. 𝐁𝐮𝐭 𝐚𝐬 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭𝐬 𝐮𝐧𝐫𝐚𝐯𝐞𝐥, 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐞𝐬 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐟𝐚𝐫 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐰𝐚𝐢𝐭𝐬 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐭𝐚𝐢𝐧𝐬. started: 06.11.2024 ended: idk i forgot published: 10.01.2025Complete
|♡| 𝐖𝐡𝐨𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐋𝐨𝐯𝐞 |♡| - 𝐁𝐮𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐱 𝐊𝐞𝐧𝐧𝐲 𝐒𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲
|♡| 𝙄𝙣 𝙎𝙤𝙪𝙩𝙝 𝙋𝙖𝙧𝙠, 𝘾𝙤𝙡𝙤𝙧𝙖𝙙𝙤, 𝙏𝙬𝙤 𝙁𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙩𝙝 𝙂𝙧𝙖𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝙉𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙆𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙀𝙖𝙘𝙝 𝙊𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧, 𝙐𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙡 𝙊𝙣𝙚 𝙊𝙛 𝙏𝙝𝙚𝙢 𝙈𝙚𝙩 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙊𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧. 𝙎𝙤𝙤𝙣, 𝙊𝙣𝙚 𝙁𝙚𝙡𝙡 𝙄𝙣 𝙇𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙒𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙊𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧, 𝘽𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙄𝙣 𝙒𝙝𝙤𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙇𝙤𝙫𝙚. |♡| |♡| {𝙉𝙊𝙏𝙀: 𝙏𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙄𝙨 𝘼 𝙉𝙊𝙏 𝘼𝙣 𝙉𝙎𝙁𝙒 𝙎𝙩𝙤𝙧𝙮. 𝙇𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙏𝙞𝙩𝙡𝙚 𝙎𝙖𝙮𝙨, 𝙄𝙩 𝙄𝙨 𝙒𝙝𝙤𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙎𝙖𝙛𝙚 𝙏𝙤 𝙍𝙚𝙖𝙙. 𝙎𝙤𝙪𝙩𝙝 𝙋𝙖𝙧𝙠 𝘿𝙤𝙚𝙨 𝙉𝙤𝙩 𝘽𝙚𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙏𝙤 𝙈𝙚. 𝙄𝙩'𝙨 𝘾𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙎𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙄𝙣 𝙂𝙚𝙣𝙚𝙧𝙖𝙡 𝙄𝙨 𝙊𝙬𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝘽𝙮 𝙏𝙧𝙚𝙮 𝙋𝙖𝙧𝙠𝙚𝙧 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙈𝙖𝙩𝙩 𝙎𝙩𝙤𝙣𝙚.} |♡|Complete
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𝑏𝑒𝑐𝑎𝑢𝑠𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢𝑟 𝑘𝑖𝑠𝑠 𝑖𝑠 𝑜𝑛 𝑚𝑦 𝑙𝑖𝑠𝑡 𝑜𝑓 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑏𝑒𝑠𝑡 𝑡ℎ𝑖𝑛𝑔𝑠 𝑖𝑛 𝑙𝑖𝑓𝑒 [ʏᴏᴜ ᴡᴇʀᴇ ᴀ ᴄʟᴏsᴇ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ ᴏғ ɢᴀʀʏ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡʏᴀᴛᴛ. ᴏɴᴇ ɴɪɢʜᴛ ᴀᴛ ᴡʏᴀᴛᴛ's ʜᴏᴜsᴇ, ᴛʜᴇ ᴛᴡᴏ ʙᴏʏs ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴇᴅ ᴀ ᴡᴏᴍᴀɴ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴄʜᴀɴɢᴇᴅ] wyattdonnellyxfem!reader started | 12.20.20 finished | 08.20.22
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