Mary Sue Detector!
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Worried that your OC is too... Unoriginal? Perfect? Boring? Well here is your answer! Just fill out the form in the first chapter about your character, and I will use the (completely legit) Mary Sue Detector! (Also works on Gary Stus).
A Mary Sue is an unrealistic and seemingly perfect character, often not very original.
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❝𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭, 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐢𝐧 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐦𝐞❞ ❝𝐲𝐞𝐬... 𝐢 𝐚𝐦❞ ❝𝐢'𝐦 𝐬𝐨𝐫𝐫𝐲, 𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭❞ 𝐢𝐧 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐡 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐧𝐥𝐞𝐲 𝐮𝐫𝐢𝐬'𝐬 𝐭𝐰𝐢𝐧 𝐬𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐚 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐩 𝐨𝐟 𝐟𝐚𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐚 𝐠𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐩 𝐨𝐟 𝐤𝐢𝐝𝐬 𝐡𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐬𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐨𝐰𝐧. 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞𝐬 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐟𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬. 𝐡𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠: #𝟏 𝐢𝐧 𝐛𝐞𝐧 𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐦, #𝟏 𝐢𝐧 𝐣𝐚𝐞𝐝𝐞𝐧𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝 [𝟏𝟏.𝟏𝟎.𝟏𝟖]Complete
|♡| 𝐖𝐡𝐨𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐋𝐨𝐯𝐞 |♡| - 𝐁𝐮𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐱 𝐊𝐞𝐧𝐧𝐲 𝐒𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲
|♡| 𝙄𝙣 𝙎𝙤𝙪𝙩𝙝 𝙋𝙖𝙧𝙠, 𝘾𝙤𝙡𝙤𝙧𝙖𝙙𝙤, 𝙏𝙬𝙤 𝙁𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙩𝙝 𝙂𝙧𝙖𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝙉𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙆𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙀𝙖𝙘𝙝 𝙊𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧, 𝙐𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙡 𝙊𝙣𝙚 𝙊𝙛 𝙏𝙝𝙚𝙢 𝙈𝙚𝙩 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙊𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧. 𝙎𝙤𝙤𝙣, 𝙊𝙣𝙚 𝙁𝙚𝙡𝙡 𝙄𝙣 𝙇𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙒𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙊𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧, 𝘽𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙄𝙣 𝙒𝙝𝙤𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙇𝙤𝙫𝙚. |♡| |♡| {𝙉𝙊𝙏𝙀: 𝙏𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙄𝙨 𝘼 𝙉𝙊𝙏 𝘼𝙣 𝙉𝙎𝙁𝙒 𝙎𝙩𝙤𝙧𝙮. 𝙇𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙏𝙞𝙩𝙡𝙚 𝙎𝙖𝙮𝙨, 𝙄𝙩 𝙄𝙨 𝙒𝙝𝙤𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙎𝙖𝙛𝙚 𝙏𝙤 𝙍𝙚𝙖𝙙. 𝙎𝙤𝙪𝙩𝙝 𝙋𝙖𝙧𝙠 𝘿𝙤𝙚𝙨 𝙉𝙤𝙩 𝘽𝙚𝙡𝙤 𝙣𝙜 𝙏𝙤 𝙈𝙚. 𝙄𝙩'𝙨 𝘾𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙎𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙄𝙣 𝙂𝙚𝙣𝙚𝙧𝙖𝙡 𝙄𝙨 𝙊𝙬𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝘽𝙮 𝙏𝙧𝙚𝙮 𝙋𝙖𝙧𝙠𝙚𝙧 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙈𝙖𝙩𝙩 𝙎𝙩𝙤𝙣𝙚.} |♡|Complete
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𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐀𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐲𝐚𝐡 𝐓𝐡𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐬𝐨𝐧 𝐣𝐨𝐢𝐧𝐬 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐚 𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐲 𝐚𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐖𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐨𝐧𝐬' 𝐥𝐨𝐝𝐠𝐞, 𝐚 𝐜𝐫𝐮𝐞𝐥 𝐩𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐤 𝐨𝐧 𝐇𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐚𝐡 𝐖𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐨𝐧 𝐠𝐨𝐞𝐬 𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐫𝐢𝐛𝐥𝐲 𝐰𝐫𝐨𝐧𝐠. 𝐀 𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐥𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐫, 𝐀𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐲𝐚𝐡 𝐫𝐞𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐨𝐝𝐠𝐞, 𝐡𝐚𝐮𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐠𝐮𝐢𝐥𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐨𝐩𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐜𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞. 𝐁𝐮𝐭 𝐚𝐬 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭𝐬 𝐮𝐧𝐫𝐚𝐯𝐞𝐥, 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐞𝐬 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐟𝐚𝐫 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐰𝐚𝐢𝐭𝐬 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐭𝐚𝐢𝐧𝐬. started: 06.11.2024 ended: idk i forgot published: 10.01.2025Complete
The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist
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A catalog of ALL of my OC's!
I decided since I haven't been active at all on Wattpad besides reading fanfictions I would make a book where you can see all my characters shown in a template I made! its shows basic info on the character and some lore for them to get the gist of them! i am allowing questions for characters and even questions on my other books! story will be updated frequently as i can bc SCHOOL! I currently have 77+ OCS to my name (that's a lot) 😂
❝𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭, 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐢𝐧 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐦𝐞❞ ❝𝐲𝐞𝐬... 𝐢 𝐚𝐦❞ ❝𝐢'𝐦 𝐬𝐨𝐫𝐫𝐲, 𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭❞ 𝐢𝐧 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐡 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐧𝐥𝐞𝐲 𝐮𝐫𝐢𝐬'𝐬 𝐭𝐰𝐢𝐧 𝐬𝐢𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐚 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐩 𝐨𝐟 𝐟𝐚𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐚 𝐠𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐩 𝐨𝐟 𝐤𝐢𝐝𝐬 𝐡𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐬𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐨𝐰𝐧. 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞𝐬 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐟𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬. 𝐡𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠: #𝟏 𝐢𝐧 𝐛𝐞𝐧 𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐦, #𝟏 𝐢𝐧 𝐣𝐚𝐞𝐝𝐞𝐧𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝 [𝟏𝟏.𝟏𝟎.𝟏𝟖]
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