Mary Sue Detector!
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Ongoing5m
Last published Thu, Sep 8, 2016
Worried that your OC is too... Unoriginal? Perfect? Boring? Well here is your answer! Just fill out the form in the first chapter about your character, and I will use the (completely legit) Mary Sue Detector! (Also works on Gary Stus).
A Mary Sue is an unrealistic and seemingly perfect character, often not very original.
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