TILL DEATH

Rose Vonner is a witch in a world where witches and demons and any other magical beings are outcasts of society. If they are caught by humans, they are either exiled or executed. She's hidden her powers all her life. Well, all twenty-one years she's been on the earth.
When invited to a wedding at a manor, during a reception party, one murder takes place after another. Most of the fingers point to either Rose or Helena, the bride. To uncover the truth behind the killings, Rose goes looking throughout the manor to find the perpetrator only to find a twisted surprise. Will she be able to overcome the evil that she's going to be up against? Will she be able to save her town, possibly the whole earth from mass destruction? Just maybe.

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Okay, I'll need serious feedback on this story. No negative feedback please. Constructive criticism is always appreciated. This one is literally one of my favorite story ideas that I've come up with, and I need serious help to make it the most spectacular book ever.

And please don't steal this book or the idea. I know a lot of people hate when their ideas are stolen, and it would be a shame for my original story to be plagiarized.
The characters are mine, the plot is mine, everything in this story is mine. Thank you so much in advanced!