TILL DEATH

TILL DEATH

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Rose Vonner is a witch in a world where witches and demons and any other magical beings are outcasts of society. If they are caught by humans, they are either exiled or executed. She's hidden her powers all her life. Well, all twenty-one years she's been on the earth. When invited to a wedding at a manor, during a reception party, one murder takes place after another. Most of the fingers point to either Rose or Helena, the bride. To uncover the truth behind the killings, Rose goes looking throughout the manor to find the perpetrator only to find a twisted surprise. Will she be able to overcome the evil that she's going to be up against? Will she be able to save her town, possibly the whole earth from mass destruction? Just maybe. ********************************************************************************************** Okay, I'll need serious feedback on this story. No negative feedback please. Constructive criticism is always appreciated. This one is literally one of my favorite story ideas that I've come up with, and I need serious help to make it the most spectacular book ever. And please don't steal this book or the idea. I know a lot of people hate when their ideas are stolen, and it would be a shame for my original story to be plagiarized. The characters are mine, the plot is mine, everything in this story is mine. Thank you so much in advanced!
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The banging starts again but this time a lot louder. I can hear the girls screaming up stairs. I pick up my phone and dial 911. "Hello this is 911 what's your emergency?" "There are a bunch of wolves outside my house. I think they have rabies or something I'm not sure." The banging gets louder and I can feel my face getting wet from the tears. "Mamm did you say wolves are there?" "Yes Yes there are wolves about 10 of them out here in my front yard. I need help!" I hang up the phone and sit on the end of the stair case. I close my eyes and start praying. Something I haven't done in a while. "I have faith, there is a god. I have faith, there is a god, I have faith, there is a god." I repeat over and over. The glass breaks and I start screaming. I stand up and try to scramble up the stairs. The door comes falling down and there are about 10 wolves standing in front of my door. A woman emerges and walks toward me. She snaps her fingers and the pretty brown wolf is in front of me. Right there by my face. "Ridanna you know what to do." Her teeth is wrapped around my neck and she sinks them in. I try to scream but it's hard to. At first it hurts but now the pain no longer exists. I feel like there is no such thing as pain and I feel light as if I can float off the Earth. Fine as hell white boy with a pro-black activist fall for each other. Cherise Miss Activist doesn't want to date Zaire the fine as hell white boy not for his race but for his secrets. What if he had a past he didn't tell you about and the only way you found out is because the past came to kill you? And I'm not talking werewolves and vampires. Cherise would only wish for problems for they would be so simple compared to hers and Zaire's. If any woman found out Zaire's secrets they'd take off running to the nearest police station or they end up in a body bag in the end. Depends....which will come first?

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