Tale of two

Hello people. DarkPandorasKnight and I have decided to make a book with which we both start writing a story with the same kind of beginning and then branch off into our own idea of a story. So please tell us what you think about our stories and how they compare. They might go to completely different storylines and we hope you enjoy!!!! You can copare these stories and see which one you prefer or if you love both!! We hope you find this experiment interesting and fun.