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"I shall avenge my kin; you shall witness what I unleash."
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An Asura princess strives to avenge her brother, creating havoc in Devlok. How will the Devas stop her?
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She achieves the goals that even her brother couldn't achieve. But at what cost?
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[Under re-writing and editing]
[Third person POV]
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Highest Ranking:
#6 in Historical Fiction on 7/3/2017
#9 in Historical Fiction on 4/3/2018
#10 in Historical Fiction on 5/1/2017
#12 in Historical Fiction on 9/2/2017
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