Beginning Anew - One Fateful Night

Beginning Anew - One Fateful Night is a very short story I wrote, mainly to get opinions before I pour my entire heart and soul onto these pages. The story is written in mostly second and third person perspective. A young vampiress is out to find her next meal when she comes across a group of human teens, though one of these teens is rather special, what happens when the young vampiress gets her hand on this special human? Read and find out, if its popular enough I may continue it into a full blown story. I'm not sure how to describe this one. Rated mature for description of blood and the possibility of future chapters.