ayoko lagyan ng description ung story qoe first time q gumawa and i dont know if my story is ok or not but im trying. my story ai katulad lng dn na mga storya na patago,, u know ung trill mnsan.. im a reader and mnsan prng nakukulangan aq, so i have no ryt to comment,,we have our own opinyon nmn eh.. so un lng po..boring ung first nya maybe sa gitna i have a good story nrn sgro.. un lng po salamatSeluruh Hak Cipta Dilindungi Undang-Undang