A Love Triangle

Hi guys ! sana po magustohan niyo tong story na to first time ko lang po kasing gumawa ng story, paki sabi na lang po kayo kung may mga nasulat akong mali or kung meron po kayong suggestions,thanks you po
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Prologue:
A Love Triangle?That's the hardest thing i ever had, It's not easy to choose one, what if you choose the guy you dream over the guy who's there for you even you're mess.You knew it, if you choose one meron talagang masasaktan for choosing the man over him,kahit pilitin mo sa sarili mo na walang masasaktan sa pagpili mo dahil nagmahal ka din, walang mali sa pag mamahal nararamdaman yan, but suddenly you realize behind your happiness there's someone getting hurt just because your happy with some other guy,mahirap talagang pumasok sa istoryang Love Triangle kayo,but in the end you have to choose the guy you dream or the guy who always there for you, even you are blind for his feelings and he always remind you that just smile and enjoy life.Sino ba talaga ang dapat??