Vampire without an Alpha
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Hi everyone!
This is my first book and I have no idea what to write in this description box because I haven't written one before...
I would like some feedback on my writing and no hate please!
The title is Vampire without an Alpha as you can see but the Alpha won't be involved until further on in the story because you need to know about the Vampire first :)
When I have written the part about the Alpha and when they meet then I will change it in the description box if I can!
Hope you like it and ALL THIS WORK IS WRITTEN BY ME!
PLEASE NO COPYING BECAUSE I'LL BE VERY UPSET! AND YOU'LL GET IN TROUBLE...
Thanks
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