Mr. Perfect
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Last published Sat, Nov 5, 2016
Hello Er'body!!
I assume you all are expecting me to give you a description of this story but, this is my first and I'm not positively sure of what to do... But this story is about a young woman named Jordenae Oldacre, who's heart was shattered to hear that her father died while he was out at a bar late one night. The alcoholic was said to have walked into the bathroom and then began to choke with his cigarette in hand. He was taken to the hospital and he died on the way.
Because of this, the poor little girl had to move to Washington DC to live with her mom.
She moved at age eight and spent the next four years in DC.
Sorry if the description was long guys!! Ily all!
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