Death's Throne

Death's Throne

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I'm really writing this in a document and intend to have it published onto the shelves, and I decided that since I don't have much time for other stories, I'd let you guys see what all my time has been used on. Criticism of all kinds (Yes, not just constructive. I want to know what your thoughts are, good or bad.) is welcome. Point out any grammatical errors as well, please. Leia, daughter of Ilyana and Elluin the Craftsman, villager of Farview. She's not much to look at. With a thin frame and a lithe body, no one would ever think that she could take down a buffalo by herself. But when disaster strikes the world of Alejandri, she is chosen to save the primal people of her home and possibly even the universe itself. Celeane, daughter of none, citizen of nowhere, is just as delicate as Leia, if not more so. But when something happens to Leia, she finds her consciousness pushing her to continue Leia's work. The problem is, Celeane has no memories. In fact, that last thing she remembers is waking up in a pile of ashes. Yet she is the key to saving the world as everyone knows it- and possibly unlocking her own past and the mystery that is Leia's death. (Currently in development. Hand-drawn cover art is being drawn...whenever I can get enough free time.)
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Altered

Before you read any of this, please know that I hate how I wrote this book and there's are major plot holes. I want to rewrite it but I can't find any motivation. I wouldn't suggest reading if you can't stand a couple confusing parts. Also there's supposed to be a sequel but this book was so shitty I can't stand to make one. ~~~~~~~~ "I never thought that something as simple as choosing to walk home instead of getting a ride would change my life so drastically." ------- Charisma Jones was just another kid who never spoke out. She wasn't shy, nor was she outspoken. She kept to herself. She was stepped on at school and bullied by those who thought she was "weird" or "a freak". She allowed them to do it, not wanting to draw anymore attention to herself. She was fine with her life how it was. But it all changed the night she left the party without a ride. ------- "I sped up walking when the car slowed down beside me. When it stopped fully I started panicking. I sprinted down the street enveloped in darkness. I thought I lost the creepy car when I heard a pop and felt a stab of pain in my side. Looking down I saw the bright feathers of a dart and my vision turned black." ------- She was altered. Now, she's back with a grudge to all those people who were cruel to her and this time, she not going to back down.

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