Tracker

Tracker

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In the country of Righello, they're are 2 factions one is made up of the poor and average people, the second faction is made up of the rich people which includes the government. The government of Righello has many rules for all the poor and average people living in the country. Like you have to marry who the government chooses, and you can only have a number of children, also you are assigned a job. And most of all NO SWIMMING! Or you are to be killed. But of course when you become the age of 16 you can rebel against the government in a fight that is all about life and death. But you have a time limit 1 month, and if you do not suceed the government can kill you in front of everyone in the country. And if you succeed then you get to join the government. But how do you rebel against the government when they are always listening and can destroy your plan within matters of seconds. How can they hear you, you ask... Well no one in Righello knows this but in your home, and your clothes there is a small tracker that records your voice and tells the government where you are. ************************************************** Ash Dungwire is a fifteen year old girl living in Righello, she is not one of the rich people nor is she associated with the government in any way, she is poor, and the government couldn't care less. Ash's 16th birthday is 2 days away and she has vowed that she will be one of the people who will rebel against the government. But Nynx Crossfire has the same idea, Nynx and Ash share a birthday and Ash has always liked Nynx and secretly Nynx has always like Ash. But neithere of them are supposed to be attracted to one another. Ash has a plan that could save Righello and everyone in it. But with the tracker the government can easily find her and kill her. Unless she notices the small black tracker in her clothes, and can destroy it. But no one has ever seen the tracker, so how will she?
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Clackers

There is nothing as powerful in life as your first love. When this happens after clacking to a strange new world where people reverse age-let's say it's complicated. Demalynn is a seventeen-year-old girl from a small town who one day hears a loud 'clack' and is transported to the planet Saffire. Naked. Then things really get weird. No child has ever been born on Saffire; clackers make up the entire population. All people who clack under thirty reverse age: each year they grow younger. As an awkward teenager plagued by panic attacks who dabbles in comedy, Demalynn just wants to go home to be re-united with her family. Citizens over thirty grow old and are forced to mine the mineral that powers giant cooling stations to keep the planet habitable. Citizens solve disputes with gladiatorial combat. The prophesy of The Coming In Saffire's time of greatest need, a child will be born to a special woman, the Gravidarum. The child, who has no father of this planet, will be known as the Unum, a child to lead Saffire. The Helper will battle to keep the Gravidarum safe until the Unum is born. The people of Saffire have been waiting to see The Coming fulfilled. Demalynn assembles a group of clackers to get her home, the most important of which is a fellow clacker: eighteen-year-old Aiden. It is not long before Jago, the ruler of Saffire, learns that a woman on Saffire is pregnant and he unleashes all his power to prevent the birth. Jago will not give up power. Demalynn is surprised to find out she is the Helper, but is astounded to learn the identity of the Gravidarum. Demalynn must battle to stay alive and fumbles towards the realization that Aiden is much more than a close friend. She is certain, with the certainty that only a seventeen-year-old can possess, that Aiden is her only true love. Demalynn is desperate to find a way back home until she must make a choice: stay with Aiden on Saffire or go back home and re-unite her family. There's no place like home.

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