Tracker
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Last published Wed, Apr 16, 2014
In the country of Righello, they're are 2 factions one is made up of the poor and average people, the second faction is made up of the rich people which includes the government. The government of Righello has many rules for all the poor and average people living in the country. Like you have to marry who the government chooses, and you can only have a number of children, also you are assigned a job. And most of all NO SWIMMING! Or you are to be killed.
But of course when you become the age of 16 you can rebel against the government in a fight that is all about life and death. But you have a time limit 1 month, and if you do not suceed the government can kill you in front of everyone in the country. And if you succeed then you get to join the government. But how do you rebel against the government when they are always listening and can destroy your plan within matters of seconds. How can they hear you, you ask... Well no one in Righello knows this but in your home, and your clothes there is a small tracker that records your voice and tells the government where you are.
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Ash Dungwire is a fifteen year old girl living in Righello, she is not one of the rich people nor is she associated with the government in any way, she is poor, and the government couldn't care less. Ash's 16th birthday is 2 days away and she has vowed that she will be one of the people who will rebel against the government. But Nynx Crossfire has the same idea, Nynx and Ash share a birthday and Ash has always liked Nynx and secretly Nynx has always like Ash. But neithere of them are supposed to be attracted to one another. Ash has a plan that could save Righello and everyone in it. But with the tracker the government can easily find her and kill her. Unless she notices the small black tracker in her clothes, and can destroy it. But no one has ever seen the tracker, so how will she?
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