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The Inner Critic [Completed]

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This is yet another attempt to impress the masses
No, I have not taken any classes
I will be trying my luck on a fourth book full of poetry
Some will describe me
While others will describe you
Sometimes, even both, that's true
So, enjoy my fourth book full of of poetry
I hope you see what you want to see from me

Cover made by @Ruechari

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