Past Unwound

This isn't going to be my final description, but I'm hoping this turns out to be good enough for you.

Bridget lives in a small city, in a small apartment with her daughter Suzie, also known as sugar, or Suzie sugar. Bridget's only concern is to keep Suzie safe. Safe from anything that could hurt her. When her father shows up drunk pounding on the door and threatening to kidnap her and Suzie, she has to move again. This is how her life went. Stay and get hurt, or move and stay free. She wants to be free from her past, and wants Suzie to know nothing of the evil in the world.

Jacob is a christian man who knows the Lord like the back of his hand. All of his life, he feels like something is missing. A piece of his heart just isn't there. As a child, and even as a teen in highschool, he was bullied constantly. From cyber bullying, to physically hurt, he wanted it to stop. For a long time he was depressed. Taking pills, drinking his problems away, and cutting himself. When he accidentally stumbled into a church one day, his eyes opened up to the Lord. He walked around with the label of 'I'm a christian', but he didn't live up to it...until he met Bridget and Suzie.

Sound interesting??? I totally made that up out of the blue. I'm hoping this will be the one book I can finish. If I do it will be a total accomplishment. It would also help if you gave your love, support, and suggestions. I'm giving you permission to criticize my story until there's nothing left to say, but I would appreciate it if you don't give out hateful comments or anything like that. :))