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Burr Oak

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Time 4h 41m

Reads 182
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Parts 21
Time 4h 41m

lovestory mystery

This is my first attempt at a mystery novel. I have been somewhat successful with science fiction and fantasy. The working title is Burr Oak. I wanted to hint at the upper Midwest dialect. An example - geeza or uff da. I find too much dialect in any writing distracting, but it's important in establishing the place of the novel. If you saw the movie "Fargo," you heard a good deal of it. I would like you to be my beta readers. Is this on track to be a good piece of mystery writing?All Rights Reserved

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A Tale Of Votara

Hi there! I'm new to writing and this is the first ever story I've written. I know there are going to be a lot of mistakes since English is neither my mother tongue nor my first language. So I would appreciate it if readers give me constructive criticism rather than hating me for a few mistakes. I thank you in advance for reading my story. Now let's dive into the story. Shall we?