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KenoLabs has created the perfect luxury- a virtual reality device as seamless and integrated as real life. The only problem is that it contains a potentially fatal design flaw.
Isaias 'borrows' the device just as one of his best friends goes missing. Isaias is tasked with finding him, but what Isaias discovers is that the two instances may be connected.
One of the scientists at KenoLabs recruits Isaias to help fix the device, but they are racing the clock. If they don't fix it soon enough, the side effects could be permanent.
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