Eluded Revere
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Last published Sun, Sep 4, 2016
When you wake up, how can you tell that you are actually awake?
Alyssa Koleman has been in a coma for most of her life, and she just recently woke up. While she tries to become accustomed to her life she wonders- Would it have been better to have stayed unconscious?
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