The Tall Woman

The Tall Woman

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Horror
In Indonesian Folklore, Kuntilanak is the ghost of a women who died during childbirth. Kuntilanak is often described as a women who wears white dress and long hair and sometimes long nails. In some versions, Kuntilanak often appears accompanied by a song or music. Similar to Kuntilanak, Sundel Bolong is another woman ghost, this one with a gaping hole in the back of the body. However in this story, we will not focus on Kuntilanak nor Sundel Bolong. But we will experience the terrors of Wanita Tinggi, or translated to english, The Tall Women. =============================================================================== The plot seems slow in the beginning, but if you stick around, it picks up later in the chapter. In the borders of Jakarta, Indonesia. Indra moved into a new house. Everything seemed average. Going to work at morning, coming home at night. Nothing out of the ordinary. But as time passes, he started the notice something odd, something out of place. Strange happenings inside the house. So many questions, but no answer. Why the house was so cheap, but in good condition, why no one wants to buy it, why his cat always acting strange, why the house seems off. Find the answers in The Tall Women. Creator's Note: It's my first time writing a horror story. No, writing in general i'm still quite new to it. Any grammar, metaphor errors, also some cheesy lines, lacking description, plot holes, please forgive me. This story timeline is linear (forward) and set in the present day (2016) in the country of Indonesia. I focus more on the creep factor rather than pure horror. I want to make a story that the reader will think back, and say "what if that story happened to me?". Also if you like my story please vote for this, or add to your reading list. I will try to make more. If you want to use my story for impersonal use, please contact me beforehand. This story is pure fictional, similar events that happened in real life are purely coincidental.
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Naay upat ka tawo nga pirmi nalang padamguhon about sa usa ka girl nga naa sa usa ka mansion nga dili klaro ang hitsura. Sige ug pangayog tabang sa ilahang mga damgo. Ug wala silay idea nganong pirmi man gyud sila padamguhon niini. Ang wala nila mahibaw-i, patay na kining babae ug namatay kini mismo sa mansion kung asa siya nagpuyo. Unsa kahay nahitabo niining bayhana? Unsa kahay tuyo tong bayhana sa ilaha? Nangayo ba kini nila ug tabang? Madumduman ba kaha nila kining mansion nga gikahimutangan sa babaeng pirmi nila madamguhan? Atong atangan. . . [this was written in 2023 (i forgot the exact date). I wrote this story under my previous fb account Isaiya Writes/Binibining Isaiya. But sadly, meta disabled my acc.]

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