The Tall Woman

The Tall Woman

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In Indonesian Folklore, Kuntilanak is the ghost of a women who died during childbirth. Kuntilanak is often described as a women who wears white dress and long hair and sometimes long nails. In some versions, Kuntilanak often appears accompanied by a song or music. Similar to Kuntilanak, Sundel Bolong is another woman ghost, this one with a gaping hole in the back of the body. However in this story, we will not focus on Kuntilanak nor Sundel Bolong. But we will experience the terrors of Wanita Tinggi, or translated to english, The Tall Women. =============================================================================== The plot seems slow in the beginning, but if you stick around, it picks up later in the chapter. In the borders of Jakarta, Indonesia. Indra moved into a new house. Everything seemed average. Going to work at morning, coming home at night. Nothing out of the ordinary. But as time passes, he started the notice something odd, something out of place. Strange happenings inside the house. So many questions, but no answer. Why the house was so cheap, but in good condition, why no one wants to buy it, why his cat always acting strange, why the house seems off. Find the answers in The Tall Women. Creator's Note: It's my first time writing a horror story. No, writing in general i'm still quite new to it. Any grammar, metaphor errors, also some cheesy lines, lacking description, plot holes, please forgive me. This story timeline is linear (forward) and set in the present day (2016) in the country of Indonesia. I focus more on the creep factor rather than pure horror. I want to make a story that the reader will think back, and say "what if that story happened to me?". Also if you like my story please vote for this, or add to your reading list. I will try to make more. If you want to use my story for impersonal use, please contact me beforehand. This story is pure fictional, similar events that happened in real life are purely coincidental.
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A fight

BOOK 1- A yes BOOK 2- A Fight Innana turned back to Osmian. "Before I forget. I made this for you." Innana said and handed the multicoloured flower to her. Osmian blushed and placed it in her hair. "Bye" Innana said and stepped into the portal that opened below her feet. She continued to wave as she sank into it like quick sand. She reappeared on the other side and fell to the ground. Her legs were weak and her stomach wanted to turn itself out. She could hear sirens going off. The demon was standing and stating up at sometimes. When Innana sat up she notices she was sweating and There was a smell in the air. Her heart picked up speed and she couldn't hear anything anymore. Just her breathing. She turned and was met with firemen trying to quench the flames that were coming from her apartment. "Koya!!!!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~•~~~~~~~~~•~~~~~~~~~~ Three relaxing weeks in the 6th zone, alternate world with two lovely Pixies. The two girls have decided to live together. When they get back home reality hits them hard. Innana finds her apartment in flames. who started it? The list is endless... not really. The devil is never too far away and trouble comes in any form. The slightest things could give way for it, like dishonesty, distrust, lack of Communication etc. It could come in form of an Ex-potential. It could come in form of a friend. It could come in form of a half sister. It could be the council. It could even be the human herself. Will Innana pull though everything life has to throw at her or will she go under at the same time trying to figure out her true self and who or what she really is. "It started with A YES and now A fight must be won." ~It's veiled❤❤

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