The Tall Woman

The Tall Woman

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In Indonesian Folklore, Kuntilanak is the ghost of a women who died during childbirth. Kuntilanak is often described as a women who wears white dress and long hair and sometimes long nails. In some versions, Kuntilanak often appears accompanied by a song or music. Similar to Kuntilanak, Sundel Bolong is another woman ghost, this one with a gaping hole in the back of the body. However in this story, we will not focus on Kuntilanak nor Sundel Bolong. But we will experience the terrors of Wanita Tinggi, or translated to english, The Tall Women. =============================================================================== The plot seems slow in the beginning, but if you stick around, it picks up later in the chapter. In the borders of Jakarta, Indonesia. Indra moved into a new house. Everything seemed average. Going to work at morning, coming home at night. Nothing out of the ordinary. But as time passes, he started the notice something odd, something out of place. Strange happenings inside the house. So many questions, but no answer. Why the house was so cheap, but in good condition, why no one wants to buy it, why his cat always acting strange, why the house seems off. Find the answers in The Tall Women. Creator's Note: It's my first time writing a horror story. No, writing in general i'm still quite new to it. Any grammar, metaphor errors, also some cheesy lines, lacking description, plot holes, please forgive me. This story timeline is linear (forward) and set in the present day (2016) in the country of Indonesia. I focus more on the creep factor rather than pure horror. I want to make a story that the reader will think back, and say "what if that story happened to me?". Also if you like my story please vote for this, or add to your reading list. I will try to make more. If you want to use my story for impersonal use, please contact me beforehand. This story is pure fictional, similar events that happened in real life are purely coincidental.
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His Wife

A woman in her 20's cooking late night maggi with sleepy eyes, her eyes are screaming emptiness, after 5 minutes she took her hot maggi to her room and comfortably sat on her bed... she is eating while watching some movie in her mobile.. soon she drowned into sleep... A man in his late twenties sitting in his home office with a hot cup of coffee and checking the details of the new project he is going to work on... as the time ticked 12 Am he slowly got up and went to his room to take some rest... As he closed his eyes the same face appeared infront of his eyes making him restless... he doesn't want to see this face but he can't help.... A college boy held a girls hand... "I love you why can't you understand why are you doing this to me.." "Sumit i am not interested in you and above all i am married so never try to come near me i only see you as a friend, if you don't want that also i will not talk to you " Suddenly a man stood infront of the college and saw the whole drama he signaled one of the bodyguard... the guard went towards the girl and bowed to her... "Ma'am sir is waiting for you" "what sir?" the girl is too confused then suddenly someone dragged her making her bag fall on ground.. she doesn't even have time to look at the person who is dragging her.. before she understand anything the car moved fastly.. she closed her eyes tightly to control herself.. within minutes they reached a mansion.. the mansion is not new to her nor to the man.. want to know whats going to happen want to know who is the man and the girl.. and whats their story don't waste your time just peep into the story. This is going to be a small story with 3 or 4 chapters but i hope you will like the story..

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