In Indonesian Folklore, Kuntilanak is the ghost of a women who died during childbirth. Kuntilanak is often described as a women who wears white dress and long hair and sometimes long nails. In some versions, Kuntilanak often appears accompanied by a song or music. Similar to Kuntilanak, Sundel Bolong is another woman ghost, this one with a gaping hole in the back of the body. However in this story, we will not focus on Kuntilanak nor Sundel Bolong. But we will experience the terrors of Wanita Tinggi, or translated to english, The Tall Women.
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The plot seems slow in the beginning, but if you stick around, it picks up later in the chapter.
In the borders of Jakarta, Indonesia. Indra moved into a new house. Everything seemed average. Going to work at morning, coming home at night. Nothing out of the ordinary. But as time passes, he started the notice something odd, something out of place. Strange happenings inside the house.
So many questions, but no answer. Why the house was so cheap, but in good condition, why no one wants to buy it, why his cat always acting strange, why the house seems off. Find the answers in The Tall Women.
Creator's Note:
It's my first time writing a horror story. No, writing in general i'm still quite new to it. Any grammar, metaphor errors, also some cheesy lines, lacking description, plot holes, please forgive me. This story timeline is linear (forward) and set in the present day (2016) in the country of Indonesia. I focus more on the creep factor rather than pure horror. I want to make a story that the reader will think back, and say "what if that story happened to me?".
Also if you like my story please vote for this, or add to your reading list. I will try to make more. If you want to use my story for impersonal use, please contact me beforehand.
This story is pure fictional, similar events that happened in real life are purely coincidental.
Emmy's life is going just as she'd planned: She's living in her own apartment, dancing every day and is just leaps away from being named her company's next Prima ballerina. And she's only 17. But all of Emmy's plans come to a screeching halt when the FBI shows up at her door to let her know that she's being stalked by a serial killer. Suddenly, the safe, insulated world she created for herself is riddled with violence, fear...and a growing pile of dead bodies. At first Emmy wants nothing more than to forget her chilling new reality - but her admirer isn't finished with her yet, and before she knows it, Emmy's stuck in a nightmare she can't dance her way out of.
Content and/or trigger warning: This story contains detailed scenes of murder, rape, torture, sex and stalking, which may be triggering for some readers.
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