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Recenzie by Lucy

Leituras 146
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Capítulos 2
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Leituras 146
Votos 22
Capítulos 2
Tempo 6m

Píšeš príbeh a chceš sa uistiť, že naozaj stojí za to?
  Chceš zviditeľniť svoj nový príbeh? 
  Nevieš, či sa ti v tom oplatí  pokračovať? 
  Potrebuješ motiváciu, rady, kontrolu gramatických chýb a podobne? 
  Potom si na správnom mieste. Napíš mi a ja si tvoj príbeh prečítam a napíšem recenziu  :)
  
  Chcem upozorniť že ani ja nie som dokonalá spisovateľka s dokonalými príbehmi a bez jedinej gramatickej chybičky. Ako vo všetkom, aj v mojich príbehoch sa nájdu chyby a tiež sa nemusia každému zapáčiť. Týmito recenziami chcem iba pomôcť spisovateľom a sama objaviť nové zaujímavé príbehy :)Todos os Direitos Reservados

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my route | aoba seragaki x m. reader , de -OrchidBloom

i don't care for the sun. i don't care for the stars. i don't care for music. i don't care for dogs. i don't care for cats. i don't care for tomorrow. i don't care for forever. but.. i do love him and suddenly, everything i didn't care for became important after all. _ the world is black and white, everything has its place, and nothing stands out. but when a splash of blue enters his life, nothing felt as dull as it used to. he doesn't know if it's worth the confusion, or if people like him are just meant to be left behind. but maybe, just maybe, there's more to the route that was his life than he expected. _ -dmmd x male reader -takes place in the same universe as in game -also fuck the anime phase 1, common route: current phase 2, y/n's route: phase 3, after-story: i do not own DRAMAtical murder, obviously.

There's Something Inside Your Head (Invader ZiM AU), de postsbythepizzaman

(I DON'T KNOW IF THIS COUNTS AS MATURE) Such a fine line. When Dib wants to ask a girl in his class to senior prom, he knows he'll get hell if he's rejected; so, he turns to the only thing he can: science. If he can turn himself into his best version of himself, nothing can go wrong! ...right? Some CWs: -stronger language than i normally have (still scared to type f*** though whoops) -knives, guns, etc. -murder, the mention of blood -contemplation of suicide -there will be a singular *suggestive* part-while nothing is going to actually be *said or shown*, there will be heavy implications. Or not, tbh idk how well i even wrote it aa All characters (except Carrie) belong to Jhonen Vasquez and Invader ZiM March 21, 2021, 3:41 PM: ayyY fellas this is at #2 for the #invaderzimau tag and #1 for #invaderzimoc let's goOO

Nijisanji One-shot Collection, de Karina93

I can't stop watching NijiGTA and want to create something where you can be in that world with them. I may write them OOC and the update may be a bit slow. This collection would involve both JP and EN Disclaimer: This series would loosely based on NijiGTA and similar streams. I only used the names of the liver and everything in here just a fiction. Please respect the boundaries of everyone involved

𝙁𝙊𝙍 𝙏𝙃𝙀 𝙃𝙀𝙇𝙇 𝙊𝙁 𝙄𝙏 ➤ 𝙎𝙐𝙉𝘼 𝙍., de Latenitewrites

"ᵈᵘᵈᵉ ⁱᵐ ᵇᵒʳᵉᵈ ʷᵉ ˢʰᵒᵘˡᵈ ᵈᵃᵗᵉ" "ᶠᵒʳ ʳᵉᵃˡ?" "ⁿᵃʰ ˡᵉᵗˢ ʲᵘˢᵗ ᶠᵃᵏᵉ ᵈᵃᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ᵗʰᵉ ʰᵉˡˡ ᵒᶠ ⁱᵗ" "ʰᵉˡˡ ʸᵉᵃʰ ⁱᵐ ᵈᵒʷⁿ" "ᵃˡʳⁱᵍʰᵗ ᵇᵉᵗ" in which one day while getting high two best friends decide to date just for the hell of it i dont own haikyuu or any gifs, pictures, etc. used. i do in fact own any oc's tho mature language and mention of alcohol and drugs

A Simple Dream [Yuuri X Lui] - Yu-Gi-Oh Arc V / Beyblade Burst, de Leopardas212

A simple dream, and poouufff, I give you a fresh one shot ^^. And if you don't like this idea that I write... I think the door lady is waiting for you ^^! (Without being too vulgar). It's a story/one shot composed of a rather particular ship, and of course, very unreal. Two respective antagonists of their anime. I know very well that many will not approve the idea. But we are all free to write what we want, right? Maybe later, after the publication, I could think that it was a really bad idea, very bad. But right now, I don't have that view yet. So just enjoy the story if you're interested. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Un simple rêve, et pouff, je vous donne un one shot tout frais ^^. Et si vous n'aimez pas cette idée que j'écris... Je pense que madame la porte vous attend ^^! (Sans être trop vulgaire). C'est une histoire/one shot composé d'un navire assez particulier, et bien sûr, très irréel. Deux antagonistes respectifs de leur animé. Je sais très bien que beaucoup ne vont pas approuver l'idée. Mais nous sommes tous libre d'écrire ce que nous voulons, non ? Peut-être que plus tard, après la publication, je pourrais penser que c'était une idée vraiment nulle, très mauvaise. Mais en ce moment, je n'ai pas encore cette vision des choses. Alors profitez juste de l'histoire si vous êtes intéressé.

To See You Again [UWMA AU], de SetByeol

« Alright, guys ? What do you think about past life and reincarnations ? » Dean was taken aback by Win's word toward his two friends. Who would ask such questions in the middle of the day. But honestly ? He was interested in their thoughts and chose to remain silent. Both Tom and Yong Gi were rendered speechless and didn't utter a word for some time. Yong Gi was knitting his brows wondering when the topic had changed. « Are you talking about the things that you see in the movie ? I mean like ... Avatar : the Air bender or something like that ? » « Without the power of air but you're getting close yeah. » ----- This is the real first fiction I have ever tried to write. As it is taking quite some time to be finished, I didn't publish it yet but would like to receive some positive advice and opinion on it too. Be aware that I am going to touch on some difficult subjects such as psychological and physical violence, even if not too deeply. My purpose is not to hurt anyone and so hope you won't see it as a personal attaque but rather a simple reference to possible events in life. ----- Began : 05/2020 Published : 09/2020 Finished : 22/12/2020 ---- This is a work of fiction and has nothing to do with any real event or person. It all started from a question and has the only aim to answer it. It is very loosely based on fictions and drama's characters or public personality's personality. I merely used fictional and real characters' names for identification purposes. I do not own any of them, credits go to their respective original owners. Credit to the rightful owner for the characters pictures, it has been taken on Ohm, Prem, Boun and co's social media ^^.

Vowels Of Raghuvanshi's, de meowislazy

"Viki, please, don't do this to me. You're hurting me" "Adu, please, trust me, I would never do that" _____________________________________ "Agastya, please save my baby, you know how much I love her. I beg you, I won't do any mischief, I will do everything you say, but please save our kid" "Ayesh, book!!! Ayesh, calm down. What are you doing? I will save our baby." _____________________________________ "Ahaan, I've given 3 chances still you want me to be a sensible person. I never wanted to take her away from you. I wanted her to experience love" "Please, Isha! I know I made a big mistake. I was crying everyday. Regretting everytime I've done to you" _____________________________________ "Ayaan, please. I love you!! Don't leave me. I know I made mistakes in the past but I want to forget everything and start a new life with you" "Urina, I'm giving you 2 days, do whatever you want but make me impressed by you. I've always loved you but something was stopping me, but now nothing's gonna separate us" _____________________________________ Hey everyone, okay so let me start by introducing myself:- • I am Ashka • I am a student • I just thought of taking my feelings out because there was no one to listen there's two person who can do that but I just have some trust issues so I just thought of representing my thoughts as a story to some people. Okay? So now 8 hearts, 4 couples, 2 family, 4 brothers, 4 sisters. Let's see how these 8 hearts are gonna get back on their track. Lights, camera and action📷.

The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition), de paulapdx

🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊

Grain Has Added You To Cool People, de Raven_Foxxies

That one texting highschool AU no one asked for but I needed so shut up and read (I have become an evil Joel) Anyway this is posted on ao3 too with more recent updates so u should read it there. - - - - - [Grian]: Hey everyone and welcome to LIFE! [GoodTimesWithScar]: Cool [GoodTimesWithScar] changed their name to [Scar] [MumboJumbo]: Grain, what is this? [Grian]: WhO iS tHiS gRaIn ChArAcTeR? - - - - - #4 in Smallishbeans, 8/29/24 ^^ #1 in Desert Duo 11/11/24 & 4/20/25 I LEGIT GOT IT AGAIN #2 in Jimmy Solidarity 11/11/24 #1 in inthelittlewood 12/8/2024 #3 in Life Series 12/8/2024, #2 in Life Series 1/16/2025 #1 in geminitay 1/14/2025 #1 in flowerranchers 1/14/2025 #1 in ethos lab 2/10/2025 #1 in smajor1995 2/10/2025 #2 in impulsesv 2/13/2025 #3 in LDshadowlady 4/6/2025 #1 in Trafficlife 4/17/2025

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completed 12/31/2024 x reader -♡'･ᴗ･'♡- Sakusa Kiyoomi-your boyfriend of nearly three years-cheated on you. He took your relationship, put it into the back of his mind, and fucked another girl. You're confused, angry, and in desperate need of a distraction. You don't know Suna Rintarou personally, but you do know he posts on his story like his life depends on it. It's annoying, but it also gives you the exact distraction you're looking for when he posts something particularly. - - "Jesus Christ," you cursed, tapping at your screen at least thirty times, "does he not do anything but post?" 𝙩𝙪𝙩𝙤𝙧𝙞𝙖𝙡 𝙤𝙣 𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙩𝙤 𝙢𝙖𝙠𝙚 𝙖𝙩𝙨𝙪𝙢𝙪 𝙨𝙩𝙛𝙪 𝙘𝙤𝙖𝙘𝙝 𝙞𝙨 𝙨𝙪𝙘𝙝 𝙖 𝙙𝙞𝙘𝙠 𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙣 𝙥𝙡𝙨 𝙥𝙪𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙙𝙤𝙜𝙨 𝙖𝙬𝙖𝙮 𝙤𝙨𝙖𝙢𝙪 𝙖𝙛𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙨𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙣𝙖𝙝 𝙢𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙖𝙣𝙖 𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙣𝙨𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣𝙨 𝙢𝙞𝙙 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙄'𝙢 𝙨𝙤 𝙝𝙤𝙧𝙣𝙮 𝙧𝙣 -✿- I wrote this for fun ‼️ All characters (unless stated otherwise) are 18+ Will contain smut (I only put #edaters as a joke guys) randomly editing

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A Simple Dream [Yuuri X Lui] - Yu-Gi-Oh Arc V / Beyblade Burst cover

To See You Again [UWMA AU] cover

Vowels Of Raghuvanshi's cover

The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition) cover

Grain Has Added You To Cool People cover

𝐡𝐞'𝐬 𝐬𝐨 𝐚𝐧𝐧𝐨𝐲𝐢𝐧𝐠 | 𝐬𝐮𝐧𝐚 𝐫. cover

my route | aoba seragaki x m. reader

i don't care for the sun. i don't care for the stars. i don't care for music. i don't care for dogs. i don't care for cats. i don't care for tomorrow. i don't care for forever. but.. i do love him and suddenly, everything i didn't care for became important after all. _ the world is black and white, everything has its place, and nothing stands out. but when a splash of blue enters his life, nothing felt as dull as it used to. he doesn't know if it's worth the confusion, or if people like him are just meant to be left behind. but maybe, just maybe, there's more to the route that was his life than he expected. _ -dmmd x male reader -takes place in the same universe as in game -also fuck the anime phase 1, common route: current phase 2, y/n's route: phase 3, after-story: i do not own DRAMAtical murder, obviously.