Shit-ton of dialogue! No plot!!! (OR SO YOU THINK! OR are suppose to. idk actually) Stupid words! Failed attempt at humor! (Which is only situational irony:basically) There's a fly around my face. help me. Foreshadowing! Duh duh duuuuun! Possible plot? Idk actually Falling over. And a bunch of these _____________________________________ it means a transition. Characters are: Rayond (mine) Narzuinray (mine) Nassir (my sisters)All Rights Reserved