Cyberpunk: The Story of Jack Rider

Hello Wattpad, this is going to be my first story written on here, so I'm going to need some practice. A little backstory, this story is going to be based upon the life of one of my roleplay characters, Jack Rider, the story is set in a Cyberpunk world, which is basically steampunk in the future, so you have cyborgs, laser guns, hover vehicles, the works. So sit back, grab a snack, and enjoy.

PS: I'll be writing the first bit as a way to test the waters, if I get a good response, ill work harder to get the rest of the story out sooner, and if any of you guys see a problem with my writing that you think should be fixed, lemme know.