Story cover for The Elysium [ON HOLD] by MandyWinchester1
The Elysium [ON HOLD]
  • WpView
    Reads 9,588
  • WpVote
    Votes 1,655
  • WpPart
    Parts 22
  • WpHistory
    Time 2h 7m
  • WpView
    Reads 9,588
  • WpVote
    Votes 1,655
  • WpPart
    Parts 22
  • WpHistory
    Time 2h 7m
Ongoing, First published Sep 09, 2016
"Congratulations, Rachael Hills," Mark says, with an uncanny - almost evil - grin on his face, "You have just successfully died." 

**********

16 year old Rachael Hills, a regular B-grade high school-er is met with a tragic accident on the eve of 2nd November at exactly 13 minutes and 9 seconds past eight. That's it, right? Now it's nothing but funeral arrangements, and strangers pretending to sigh over her 'sad loss'. But it's not quite over yet for Rachael. 

She wakes up in an alternate realm, the Elysium - the closest to heaven one can get. The most gorgeous utopia of dreams-come-true where she can spend eternity in. 

Literally. 

Oh, but that's not it either. 

Rachael is a Recruit, and she must be trained for a war to come. A war against humans. 

Immortality, is after all, a fate worse than death.



// Highest Ranking - #6 in Science Fiction (15/02/2017) //


// updates: CURRENTLY ON HOLD//
All Rights Reserved
Sign up to add The Elysium [ON HOLD] to your library and receive updates
or
#28agwritingawards
Content Guidelines
You may also like
Alone At Last (UNEDITED) by Random_Art329
19 parts Complete Mature
PLEASE READ DESCRIPTION! Everyone likes being alone once an a while. That feeling of peace and all your problems drifting into space melting away, 16 year old Luke soon learns that being alone is not always a pleasant feeling. When he wishes to be left alone upon a wishing well he soon discovers being alone isn't such a nice feeling. As Lukes mind slips away from reality he's losing sanity. How much longer can he take this madness?? Is he doomed too forever be this way? Take a journey with Luke as you read the story "Alone At Last" as he struggles to survive. PREVIEW INTO BOOK: ... When I shut the door behind me I realized that no cars were driving out here either. They were all empty and abandoned. As I strolled by there were no people talking in the coffee shop windows. There were no people eating in restaurants. There were no sounds except my heavy breathing and the howling wind. "HELLOOOOOOOO" I shouted, "IS ANYONE HEREEEEE HELLOOOOO!!?" I continued to call out to no one in particular feeling a little agitated by the growing silence. That's when I heard it... The winds howling came to a stop. The world seemed to stop turning. Time itself came to a halt. Leaves caught in the breeze and remained motionless. That was until the wind came calling back to me, and in this it whispered one word that answered all my questions... Alone- ---------------~~~~~ Thank you for choosing to read my story I hope you like and enjoy it!!! Please note: I am not a professional writer and I am terrible at spelling so don't judge!!!! THIS IS THE UNEDITED VERSION! THE EDITED VERSION WILL BE POSTED SOON! WARNINGS: NOTE: BOOK INCLUDES: 1.) SWEARING - & HATEFUL WORDS 2.) BULLYING - 3.) SUICIDE & MAJOR CHARACTER DEATH (also incudes thoughts and mentions of it)- 4.) BLOOD & GORE (lightly graphic)- 5.) ABUSE- 6.) And other things like that Don't say I didn't warn you!!! DONT FORGET TO VOTE !!! <3
{The Firelight Chronicles} 6: SE7EN, The Sunflower Effect (girlxgirl) Lesbian by ilmioamore
8 parts Complete
Disclaimer: I wrote this novel before the movie Lucy came out it is in no way related but the premise of the brain and the powers eerily similar It is the year 2173. Human beings have evolved to use more than 10% of their brain, and as an effect, possess supernatural powers. Luna and Lara Valkyrie grew up in a foster home in the town of Westhaven, California. Both 18 and having been born on the same day, they were raised as twins, Luna adopting Lara's surname because of her own being unknown. Westhaven is a lovely town, the perfect place to live the american dream in. There is only one problem. Not only there, but in almost every place in the world, human beings are branded with a number, that being the amount of supernatural abilities they possess. By the time each child reaches the age of 18, that number becomes permanent, and everyone with a ranking above 5 is taken away. From that moment on, they belong to the government, and must train in government facilities that are a lot like prisons or army bases. Their eyes are changed by machines, and they are identified for the bright aura-like color that surrounds their pupils and contrasts against their natural eye color, "the sunflower effect". The day of the chosen has come, and Luna Valkyrie is a seven. When she is taken by government guards, she believes her life is over. That is, until she meets Alexandra Pertierra, a brazen 23 year old with a rank of eleven who turns her world upside down with a cocky smirk. *An aftermath to Wicked Intentions*
You may also like
Slide 1 of 10
Alone At Last (UNEDITED) cover
Another Dimension cover
You Make The Pain Go Away cover
Protecting Cecilia cover
Haven't I given enough? Given enough.  cover
{The Firelight Chronicles} 6: SE7EN, The Sunflower Effect (girlxgirl) Lesbian cover
Til Death Tears Me Apart Once Again [Discontinued] cover
Dimensions (the alternate worlds) cover
Types of tears (COMPLETED)  cover
Why do I love you? (COMPLETED!!! In editing process) cover

Alone At Last (UNEDITED)

19 parts Complete Mature

PLEASE READ DESCRIPTION! Everyone likes being alone once an a while. That feeling of peace and all your problems drifting into space melting away, 16 year old Luke soon learns that being alone is not always a pleasant feeling. When he wishes to be left alone upon a wishing well he soon discovers being alone isn't such a nice feeling. As Lukes mind slips away from reality he's losing sanity. How much longer can he take this madness?? Is he doomed too forever be this way? Take a journey with Luke as you read the story "Alone At Last" as he struggles to survive. PREVIEW INTO BOOK: ... When I shut the door behind me I realized that no cars were driving out here either. They were all empty and abandoned. As I strolled by there were no people talking in the coffee shop windows. There were no people eating in restaurants. There were no sounds except my heavy breathing and the howling wind. "HELLOOOOOOOO" I shouted, "IS ANYONE HEREEEEE HELLOOOOO!!?" I continued to call out to no one in particular feeling a little agitated by the growing silence. That's when I heard it... The winds howling came to a stop. The world seemed to stop turning. Time itself came to a halt. Leaves caught in the breeze and remained motionless. That was until the wind came calling back to me, and in this it whispered one word that answered all my questions... Alone- ---------------~~~~~ Thank you for choosing to read my story I hope you like and enjoy it!!! Please note: I am not a professional writer and I am terrible at spelling so don't judge!!!! THIS IS THE UNEDITED VERSION! THE EDITED VERSION WILL BE POSTED SOON! WARNINGS: NOTE: BOOK INCLUDES: 1.) SWEARING - & HATEFUL WORDS 2.) BULLYING - 3.) SUICIDE & MAJOR CHARACTER DEATH (also incudes thoughts and mentions of it)- 4.) BLOOD & GORE (lightly graphic)- 5.) ABUSE- 6.) And other things like that Don't say I didn't warn you!!! DONT FORGET TO VOTE !!! <3