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Boys Under Review [OPEN]
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**This is a critique book. Yes, I know the title says 'Review', but 'Boys Under Critique' doesn't sound as good.**
Boy meets boy. Boys fall in love. They struggle but manage to find a happily ever after. A very basic story formula. One I intent to scrutinize closely. This is a critique book themed towards lgbt writing.
Warning: this book contains spoilers of other books. Some books may contain mature content. Readers discretion is advised.
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