The Bewitched One (Eric Coulter Fic)
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"Am I so terrible that you won't even look at me?"
Eric then stared at Venus and he inhaled deeply as he cupped her warm face with his hands, closing his eyes knowing what he had to do next. He leaned his forehead onto hers and took in a breath of her scent, that scent he had come to love.
"No...But I am for doing this."
He whispered to her and she furrowed her brows as he looked back at her with tearful eyes. Eric then placed his hands on her shoulders and pushed her back. Venus gasped as she falls over the building and Eric looked at her as she falls to nearer to the ground reaching her death.
Eric had killed the girl he had come to love.
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