In Fatis

This is my first story so there will definitely be mistakes, plot-holes, etc.
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Mates, or soul mates, are the other half of a werewolf's heart. They make each other stronger with the love they have for one another. Yet, there is a fault that lies within this sugar-coated glory. They cannot choose who to love.
21-year-old Shen Zhang is Blue Moon's future Alpha. With his serious sex appeal, his bad boy style and his charismatic yet calm attitude, he was the stereotypical son of an Alpha.
In addition, Shen had a girlfriend, Bella Sooyoung, the Beta's daughter. They were perfect in every way: pure bloodline, both of which adored by their pack, both of which extremely attractive. Yet, fate had other plans.

Arielle would resort to distracting herself as much as she could to avoid the pain of losing her father. This, plus her introverted attitude meant that her presence wasn't well-known and her social circle small. This was fine with her, but not for her mate.
On the day of Ari's 16th birthday, it is discovered that Ari and Shen are mates. Shen, disappointed and angry that Bella isn't his mate, rejects Ari. Surprisingly, Ari doesn't run away. Instead, an opportunity arises that not only separates the unlikely pair but perhaps strengthens a somewhat fated bond.